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The Troops Legacy (Writing)
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actually, not to be a huge tool but

Troops is a Koopa Troopa, right? Can't he like
just duck under an awning and sleep in his shell if he can't find a place to live?

and moreso, if he's in this situation couldn't he have just got into his shell, bank off all the walls and just
destroy everyone in the room if it was so dark?

i do like the koopa air force though (paratroopas, HEH) and there's some neat ideas throughout but
the execution is....mediocre at best :/
maybe part 2 can improve on these things!!


edit: thats it im gonna go write a fanfic where chargin chuck becomes a ufc fighter!!!
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The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by supersmashbrawl - 04-25-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Proton - 04-25-2011, 11:50 AM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Garamonde - 04-25-2011, 12:04 PM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Devicho - 04-25-2011, 06:53 PM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Devicho - 04-25-2011, 07:25 PM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Orgasmatron - 04-25-2011, 08:40 PM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Maxpphire - 04-26-2011, 04:39 AM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Gors - 04-26-2011, 05:35 AM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Chutzpar - 04-26-2011, 08:24 AM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Kosheh - 04-26-2011, 09:52 AM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Maxpphire - 04-26-2011, 02:49 PM
RE: The Troops Legacy (Writing) - by Gors - 04-26-2011, 09:10 PM

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