RPG Monsters

[BynineB]

the ammount of selout ruins your work. Small sprites often do not take advantage of selout this harsh.

Really? I thought it made them look a bit better. Well, I'll try using a more dependable outline and see how that goes.

also the guy is hardly readable, I had to zoom him 6 times to understand what's going on with his face

More readable.. I'm not sure how to go about making a person's features easy to understand. Increase the contrast of the parts?

not to mention the pose is completely off-balance and unnatural as hell

Ah, natural poses.. how they elude me.. I'll draw an outline and see if it's less stiff and awkward.

I'm finding it worse.

I liked the simplicity of the original.
If you are going to shade it, I suggest a better palette with more contrast, because the shaded ones are not working visually.

It's simple but it doesn't seem finished. You're right, I'll increase the contrast.




I feel like the bean cattle are looking pretty good now. Besides the face, I haven't finished Pedro (the guy on the right), as I'm attempting to figure out a natural pose..