06-20-2011, 12:14 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-20-2011, 01:58 AM by StarSock64.)
That velociraptor is ultra cool. Mega Man, though, has way too many shades. You could definitely cut down the color count and increase the contrast. It looks kind of pillowy, too, I have no idea what your light source is supposed to be doing. Try to look at how clean your references do their shading instead of trying to think of how mega man games shade him and trying to condense that. His limbs look pretty awkward, too. Umm, more specifically I guess I'd say his left arm isn't really readable and could be shaped with more elbow and hand distinction. I don't really like how his right shoulder connects to his arm, and his right leg is looking kind of squished. All these lefts and rights are from his perspective
edit: okay it's kind of late and I can't really even see what I'm doing anymore but I gave it a try
There's stuff I should've fixed better, like his legs, but I can't spend more time on it. I'm not familiar with the style so I probably didn't really conform to it but I hope it gives you ideas anyway.
edit: okay it's kind of late and I can't really even see what I'm doing anymore but I gave it a try
There's stuff I should've fixed better, like his legs, but I can't spend more time on it. I'm not familiar with the style so I probably didn't really conform to it but I hope it gives you ideas anyway.