05-29-2012, 12:01 PM
what the fuck is this supposed to be
I mean, I've read quite shitty stuff here in tSR, but this takes the prize, really. What is this? Is this a story? Is this a game idea script? I have no fucking idea. In fact, the story is so littered with in-game scripts that completely kills the flow of the story (if it even has one).
Okay, I just read through all this text. There is simply nothing interesting in the story at all, period. Either make a conventional narrative story, or keep those scripts to yourself. No one on tSR wants to read boring stuff.
I mean, I've read quite shitty stuff here in tSR, but this takes the prize, really. What is this? Is this a story? Is this a game idea script? I have no fucking idea. In fact, the story is so littered with in-game scripts that completely kills the flow of the story (if it even has one).
Okay, I just read through all this text. There is simply nothing interesting in the story at all, period. Either make a conventional narrative story, or keep those scripts to yourself. No one on tSR wants to read boring stuff.
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