06-13-2012, 02:24 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-16-2012, 05:14 PM by Makermatic21.)
(06-07-2012, 11:51 AM)Afr0Blu3 Wrote: How is this a game script, in any way, shape, or form? Do you understand how games and games design works? I see no mention of any gameplay mechanics, features, or even gameplay segments. There doesn't seem to be a gap for these to be sporadic cutscenes within a game either.
If you want to make a game, then make a game, if you want to write a story, then write a story.
Don't write a script for a play and try to pass it off as a game script. That simply insults our intelligence. You've been told there are major flaws with this multiple times and you just keep on going. Wouldn't be surprised if you're just copy pasting this around 20 or so boards at the same time.
Okay 'Afr0Blu3' I've already stated that I'm presenting this as a DRAMA script since it confused people on these boards before. Here's the deal we'll just call this a fictional SMASH story that one day may or may not be a game. As far as including game ideas people didn't like that the 1st time I did that. Just enjoy this for what it is. I don't iontend to insult anyones intelegence, but you good sir aren't paying attention. I've fixed the flaws with it as best I could. Anyway don't look for flaws enjoy it for what it is. Pasting on 20 other boards? Not a bad idea. I might put it all over the internet, but not until I'm done here first.
So grin and bare it and get ready for chapter 3...
Chapter 3: Rumble in the Jungle (Part A)
We see Luigi fall from a portal into an ocean.
Luigi: Wahh!
After a long time of swimming Luigi ends up on DK Island. Luigi walks toward DK's house. There is a rumbling noise.
Luigi: (Stopping.) Heh?
Suddenly DK busts out of his house and lands. He beats his chest and makes angry monkey noises. He is now standing in front of eight barrels. He tosses a nearby barrel at Luigi.
Luigi: Wah!
Luigi is forced to dodge many barrel tosses and eventually he bonks DK in the head with enough jumps to stun him. DK is now rubbing his head in defeat. Just than chimp noises are heard. DK turns and sees Diddy Kong. He's pointing to DK's banana hoard. Dk, Diddy, and Luigi enter the Kong Banana hoard. DK makes a disappointed face while Diddy angrily stomps on his hat.
Luigi: speaks to DK.
DK and Diddy stare. Luigi reaches behind him to give DK bananas he found. DK and Diddy get excited. All three exit the hoard. DK and Diddy munch on the bananas Luigi gave them.
Luigi: speaks.
DK and Diddy nod their heads.
Luigi: Yay hay!
DK and Diddy begin to follow a walking Luigi, but DK stops. DK turns to Diddy and points to the banana hoard. Diddy makes angry chimp noises. DK crosses his arms. Diddy runs off and back to DK's house. He enters the house. DK turns to Luigi and bangs his fists together. They run off together.They both walk toward a portal. However the portal closes.
Luigi: eh? Oh! (He starts to panic.)
Now Luigi is crying because the portal is gone and there is no way home. DK is scratching his head. He makes his IDK taunt from the Smash bros. Series and than grabs Luigi, who stops crying.
Luigi: eh? Wah!
Dk chucks Luigi over his shoulder and dives into the ocean. Dk is now seen swimming acrossed the ocean with Luigi on his back.
The scene fades to black.
Chapter 3: A Link Between Kingdoms (Part B)
Our scene opens with Yoshi falling through a portal and landing in the middle of Hyrule. He lands flat and than stands up . Peach is seen shrieking and falling from the portal.
Yoshi: Whoa!
Yoshi hurries to catch the Princess. She lands on his back.
Peach: Okay Yoshi. You heard the Professor. Let's get moving.
Yoshi: Yoshi.
Peach: Oh it's raining out. This better not ruin my dress. (A growl is heard.) Yoshi stay focused. I'm hungry too, but we need to find that knight to aid our kingdom first.
Yoshi: Yoshi?
A loud shriek is now heard and a hand is on Peach's shoulder.
Peach: Yoshi? She turns to see a Redead. Peach screams eeek! Help!
She jumps off Yoshi and gets behind him. Yoshi makes a fierce face and yells
Yoshi: Yoshi!
A battle is about to begin between a hoard of Redeads and Yoshi. Though he fought tanaciously Yoshi was felled in battle.
Yoshi: OEOWOWOWOWOW!
He faints. Peach is now terrified.This looks like the end, but not too far away is Young Link heading into the Temple of time. He walks over to the master sword and pulls it from the pedistool of time. A blinding flash of blue light envelopes him and Adult Link is now standing there with the master sword. After exiting the Temple of Time Link pulls out his Ocarina and plays Epona's song. Link jumps on Epona and rides off in search of the fierce battle and screams of a young woman he heard in peril. Yoshi is still down. Peach is surrounded and terrified.
Peach: Yoshi. Yoshi... please. You have to get up. You have to fight. (sob)
Suddenly we hear Link's famous battle cry and see him leap off of Epona, landing next to Peach, slashing a Redead in half, but scaring her in the process. Peach steps back as Link dose his famous spin, his sword aflame with intense magic, and cut down the remaining redeads. More are coming. Link uses his arrows to keep them at bay. More head toward Yoshi and our heroes are surrounded... Thinking quickly Link plays the sun song on his ocarina freezes the redeads. Link than pulls out his hook shot out and fires at a nearby tree. He grabs Peach in his arm. Yoshi now has recovered and grabs Peach's leg not knowing if Link is friend or foe and is still trying to do his duty of protecting the Princess. The three fly into the air and land on the back of Epona who gallops off in the direction of Hyrule castle. Link, Peach, and Yoshi enter Hyrule castle where they meet the King and Princess Zelda. After some time elapses Peach shares her story with the King and Princess Zelda...
King: … So that's when Link brought you here.
Zelda: Good thing too. Those Redeads are quite dangerous. Are you alright stranger?
Peach: We're fine. (She turns to Link) Thank you for your help… uh…
Navi: Hey. Listen. He's Link.
Peach: Thank you Link. Wait Link… If you're Link than… I must be in…
Zelda: The kingdom of Hyrule. Welcome.
Peach: Hyrule? Than you are Princess Zelda. Oh this is fantastic. The Professor sent me to request the help of you two? Oh, did you hear that Yoshi? The Mushroom Kingdom is as good as saved!
Yoshi: Yoshi!
Zelda: Mushroom Kingdom? Oh sweetie you must be confused. Link, did this young girl take a bump to the head when you rescued her?
Peach: Honest it's true. I'm Princess Peach Toadstool.
Zelda: The Princess Peach Toadstool? That can't be. I've heard many tales of that far away kingdom and I know it has one of the mightiest heroes of all time protecting it. None other than the famous Super Mario. Oh... and his brother as well. What was his name again?
Peach: Oh you mean Luigi?
Zelda: Right Luigi. With the two famous twin brothers protecting the Mushroom Kingdom why would the Princess ever need to travel such a long distance to request Hyrule's aid?
King: You think she's a spy than Princess?
Zelda: I'm not sure. But her story doesn't add up.
Yoshi: ( Angry) Yoshi!
Peach: Hey, I'm no spy and I AM Princess Toadstool. Please let me explain. The fate of the Mushroom Kingdom isn't the only matter to be concerned with. The fate of many worlds; including this one are at stake.
Zelda: This world? You mean all of Hyrule?
King: Nonsense. Hyrule is in no peril. Even if it were Link would stop the opposing threat; just like his ancestors before him. Our guards are the best fighters throughout the land. Hyrule has its chosen champion; just like the Mushroom Kingdom has its hero, Super Mario.
Peach: (breaks into tears) No… I'm afraid we had Mario. He was kidnapped and we don't know where to find him. That's why I've come all this way. Zelda… from one Princess to another I humbly request your aid. (Peach drops to her knees her head held down. Still sobbing softly.)
Zelda: Your Majesty we must at least hear this girl's tale from the beginning.
King: What? The Super Mario being kidnapped? The Mushroom Kingdom falling into ruin? Rubbish!
Zelda: Your Majesty I implore you to hear her out. I belive she speaks the truth. This must be Princess Toadstool. If I'm wrong we'll have her treated for any wounds and I'll provide a safe heaven for her in the village. But if I'm right… sigh…If I'm right I want to know what she knows about a possible attack on Hyrule. This sounds most urgent . Princess Toadstool. Rise and tell me your tale. You have my attention.
Peach: Oh thank you Princess Zelda. You are most gracious. Well…I guess I should tell you what I know…
After a breif explanation...
Zelda: This is most troubling indeed. I've made my decision. Link are you well equipped for a long travel?
Navi: Hey…Listen…Link's always prepared. He's ready for anything.
Zelda: Good. Link, you, Navi, and myself are leaving at once for the Mushroom Kingdom. Link nods.
King: Princess I ask you to reconsider. We still don't know if we can trust this girl or if this is all a trap set up by our enemies. Suppose our enemies want you and Link to leave Hyrule so they can conquer it with you two out of the picture.
Zelda: First of all this girl is the Princess Toadstool of the Mushroom Kingdom. I'm sure of it. Her word is good enough for me. As far as Hyrule is concerned you said so yourself that we have the best guards and warriors throughout the land. They will keep Hyrule safe until our return.
King: Princess be reasonable. Our armies are most powerful indeed, but we are no match for the strength of Gannon and his armies of darkness.
Zelda: Gannon has been dealt with. Link and I have made sure of that.
King: Still what if he returns like he has so many times before and you and Link are not here to stop him? I must deny your request. The fate of Hyrule rests in the hands of yourself and Link. Not outsiders.
Zelda: You're right. The fate of Hyrule rests in Link's and my hands. Which is why I'm leaving with Princess Peach in a preemptive strike against the forces of evil. If I'm correct I'll be saving Hyrule from peril once and for all. Gannon may be defeated, but there are other evil forces at work. I'll stop them all. I'll see the day when Gannon is stopped for good and Hyrule knows peace and prosparity for the remainder of her days. That is my fondest wish and my destiny as a Princess to fulfill. Peach wants the same thing. For her kingdom. No more threats from Bowser and safety and prosparity for all her people. The threat of evil stops now. Hyrule and the Mushroom Kingdom shall unite forces and we will vanquish evil once and for all."
Our heroes exit the castel and head towards a portal. Our heroes return to Professor E. Gadd's Lab.
E. Gadd: My back so soon?
Peach: You told us to be remember Professor?
E. Gadd: Yes… hm well… uh… where's Lui… FLASH! Luigi! You're soaking wet. What happened? Luigi speaks.You say the portal just closed up. Hm. This is troubling. Most troubling indeed. In any event It's good to see you're all here unharmed. DK speaks. Uh… yes it's good to see you too. DK one arm hugs the professor. The Profesors face is blue. Ugh… good indeed. Care for this? He hands DK a bananna. DK is now happily jumping up and down. Yes it's so nice of you to join our cause. Princess. I see you have brought back your heroes as well.
Peach: Yes Professor. This is Princess Zelda of Hyrule.
Zelda: Pleased to meet you Professor.
Peach: And with her is … Navi: Link, Listen, This is the scientist who requested our aid.
E. Gadd: Oh my a little talking butterfly. How interesting.
Navi: Hey I'm no butterfly. I'm Navi, Link's personal fairy assistant. He's fortunate to have me around you know. Why once he was the only boy in Kokiri village who didn't have a fairy. It really is such a sad tale. Why I rember when…
Zelda: Calm down little sprite. We need to know what's going on here.
Navi: Right. Link. Get ready to listen. Are you listening? Listen Link.
E. Gadd: Right. Let me first start off by saying Link. We owe you our gratitude for coming here. Without your heroic skills and abilities we may not surive this invasion. Enemies have not only invaded our world, but yours as well. Even now they grow in number. Soon we may not be able to stop their growth. Soon they may take over all worlds, no whole universeres, which could potentially result in…
Peach: Uhm… Excuse me Professor?
E. Gadd: Yes Princess?
Princess Peach: Link and Zelda are already aware of the growing danger. You just need to tell us how to stop it.
E. Gadd: Oh right than. Yes I suppose I did get off topic there huh?
Navi: I followed you.
E. Gadd: Thank you butt… er little sprite.
Navi: Navi
E. Gadd: Navi. Hm.. Interesting.
Peach: What is it Professor?
E. Gadd: these readings. According to my calculations the length of the portals are shortening. This is indeed a problem. We have less time to gather heroes and you all have to…
Zelda: Have to what Professor?
E. Gadd: Travel into space. Everyone gasps. Uh don't worry though fortunately I have a little something in hand to help you all out. Behold.
He presses a button on a remote control and a wall panel opens up revealing...
Zelda: Are those space suits?
E. Gadd: Sure are. Nifty huh?
Peach: But professor when did you start desiging space suits? I thought your work uinvolved the supernatural and paranormal.
E. Gadd: It does. It does. But the Mario bros. Must be ready to travel anywhere at all times and I figured sooner or later they may need to be equipped to travel through space. So I've secretly been working on designing these special space suits for the bros. And all the citizens of the Mushroom Kingdom.
Peach: All of our citizens?
E. Gadd: Well sure. It's always good to be prepared. I mean what if some day Bowser figures out a way to send all the inhabitants of the Mushroom Kingdom into Outter space while he's on one of his missions to capture you? That could happen.
Peach: Professor. Outer Space? Even Bowser wouldn't be crazy enough to launch all of us into outer space. Besides Could you imagine Mario flying around in outer space with Yoshi trying to save me and Luigi? Boy the notions you come up with sometimes. You're so silly Professor.
E. Gadd: Well in any event I've managed to create costumes for all of you and I may have a spare for Link and his traveling companions here. Ah yes. Here we are. Everyone gear up. Everyone suits up. ( The suits are the ones from Space Land from Mario Party 2.) These specially designed suits will be able to stand the atmospheric pressure of the Planet Zebes. There you must find the one called Samus.
Peach: Samus?
We now see a flashback cutscene of Ridley destroying the Mushroom Kingdom.
Ridley: Flee. Flee in terror! I've only just begun. He blows something up. My tyranny over this land will not end until you surrender Samus to me.
Toad 1: Ah! What's a Samus?
Toad 2: I don't know. Do you?
Toad 3: No.
Ridley: Fools! Do not play dumb with me. I was informed she's hiding here. Now wherte is she? He shoots more beams.
Toads: AAAAAHHH!
Scene flashes back to now.
Peach: That creature… it demanded Samus. Where is it now?
E. Gadd: It said it had other matters to attend to, but that it would return.
Zelda: Than our mission is clear. Whoever this Samus is we need to find him and fast. Maybe we can use him to lure that creature back here and than we'll spring an ambush on it.
E. Gadd: Sounds like the best solution we've got.
Peach: I Agree we need a plan but… we can't just use Samus for our own personal gain. First we'll have to gain his trust than maybe he'll agree to fight for us.
Zelda: Agreed. The problem is we don't know what Samus looks like. Do you know Professor?
E. Gadd: I 'm not sure. That I'm afraid you'll have to discover for yourselves.