Super Smash Bros. Clash

[StarSock64]

I suggest avoiding nintendo fanfics altogether

First of all, there's so many nintendo fanfics out there that nobody really wants to stop and read them
Second of all, nintendo games tend to consist of no talking or little phrases and whatnot. Your dialogue is very likely to be awkward. And, well, it is.

I know you like nintendo, but it's just not good for this kind of thing. I think you would grow more and everyone would appreciate your work more if you did something original.