07-17-2012, 11:17 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-17-2012, 11:17 PM by Sevenstitch.)
Des has said all that really needs to be said concerning critique, and you'd do well to heed his advice.
Honestly, If you use pleasantries to sweep his advice aside, as you've done before to others in this
thread, and continue to write in the manner you do, you'll keep receiving a generally negative response
from this forum.
Please, for your own sake, take a look at your work, and try to improve. I hope the next thing you post
is clear and well thought out. I wish you the best of luck.
Honestly, If you use pleasantries to sweep his advice aside, as you've done before to others in this
thread, and continue to write in the manner you do, you'll keep receiving a generally negative response
from this forum.
Please, for your own sake, take a look at your work, and try to improve. I hope the next thing you post
is clear and well thought out. I wish you the best of luck.