Now, for something completely different:

[Omegakyogre]

I think the textures/shape are good, but I don't know... is it supposed to look so bright? And what's the sprite doing?

Yeah, I'm trying to make it low contrast and center it around an unsaturated blue/white spectrum.

And, the sprite is supposed to be holding his jaw, mainly with his thumb and index finger, in thought. I've been editing and editing it, trying to make it look better, but I just can't seem to do it. I believe it would be best to either A- remove the sprite entirely (from the picture, that is), or B- re-sprite his head without his hand and add his hand back from scratch. I'll probably do both.

Nice. What's that dome-like thing behind the water.
I never could texture mountains but it seems you've got it down.

During the sketch phase, it was supposed to be a mountain-- but because I had to use the mouse to draw, it wound up horribly misshapen, along with the mountain behind it. When I was cleaning up the outlines, it looked like a dome with a curved, sharp cover, so I outlined it rather spontaneously. I never got around to removing it, so there it stayed...
And: The mountain on the left took forever. I'm just glad I did it so I know how to do it from here on out.