07-10-2013, 08:52 AM
Main things I notice off-hand are that his arms are too long compared to his legs, so either make the legs longer or the arms shorter (the former would look better I think) and the arms are like noodles for some reason... His right arm sticks out more though cause the upper arm after the shoulder just kind of curves out, which doesn't show the definition of the joint? I think? I'm also curious why his eyes are piercing red but that's not a critique from me. The scarf though looks like it's just kind of coming out from the back, and you can't really tell it's wrapped around his neck so I'd work on giving him a bit of a neck so you can show the scarf.