05-10-2015, 08:41 PM
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Here is the final part of my script. I'm sorry for putting these all in spoilers. I just didn't want to overwhelm the posts with a very long script.
(The scene cuts to the outside of the Koopa Bros. Fortress. There is a sign that reads "Additional Koopa Bro. wanted." The scene then cuts back to the bedroom of the Koopa Bros. The most notable thing is that any and all times and furniture belonging to Black are gone. As for the remaining three Koopa Bros., they are lounging around in a bored, depressed manner.)
Red: Any other bright ideas, guys?
Green: Personally, I don't think we're getting much luck with kidnapping any of Mario's party, so how abotu tryign a new plan?
Red: ……….. Any other bright ideas, Yellow?
Yellow: It not like those two are the only guys on Mario's team, so how about trying our luck with the rest of them?
Red: Hm, not a bad idea! We should be able to nick at least one of them. So… Going to Lavalava Island is a no-go since none of us can't swim and there ain't anyone in Toad Town willing to take the likes of us there…
(Green makes a comment about how he can swim, while Red was talking. Obviously, he was ignored.)
Yellow: Don't forget that we aren't exactly welcome in Koopa Village, so that crosses off two more on the list.
Red: Hmmm… What about that guy who keeps calling himself Spike?
Green: You mean Lakilester? Isn't he the guy with that scary girlfriend?
Yellow: Oh yeah… The last guy who looked at him funny ended up having a Spiny Egg surgically removed.
Red: Yeesh! Okay, so that doofus is out! How about that ghost chick? What's her name? Lady Boo?
Yellow: Lady Bow, Red. Still, she is a Boo, so I get why you'd get her name confused.
Green: Wait, isn't she the owner of that haunted house near the edge of the Forever Forest?
Red: Well, where else would a ghost live, ya Scaredy Rat?
Green: No, it's not that! It's just that the guy who guides travelers through the forest has gone into hiding ever since people took note of him making frequent trips to the bushes outside of that ghost house. They said that he sped right through town dropping a trail of Strange Leaves the moment they saw Tayce T. getting woozy after baking too many of those Strange Cakes for him. Without that leafy guy's help, getting through the Forever Forest is really difficult now.
Red: Grrr…
(Red lunges at Green and grabs him by the neck.)
Red: Gosh darn it, Green! Must you be a buzzkill!? I'm sick of telling why we can't kidnap any of Mairo's partners!
Green: *Franticly* Wait-wait-wait! There's Watt! There's Watt!
(Red lets go of Green out of confusion.)
Red: What?
Yellow: He means Watt as in the yellow baby sun thing. Mario saved her from some ghost who kidnapped her a while back.
Red: Kidnapped, eh? *Grins and rubs hands together* What are you waiting for, boys!? If we play our cards right, we might get a professional kidnapper on our team to take care of the rest of those chumps! To the Toy Box!
(Red and Yellow rush out of the room, while Green is picks himself and breaths heavily. He then slowly walks forward.)
***
(The scene cuts to the outside of the Big Lantern Ghost's room in Shy Guy's Toy Box. The scene cuts again to the inside of it, which is extremely dark.)
???: Wee hee hee hee… Glad you could join me… In the dark…
Red: No offense, dude, but there's no way we'll be able to work out a deal when it's so pitch black, like this.
(There is the sound of a light switch clicking as the lights in the room turn on. It is revealed that Red has activated a comically large light switch and he is accompanied by Yellow and the Big Lantern Ghost.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Gah! I hate the light!
Yellow: Be reasonable, man. We'll let you return to the darkness once we finish our business here. Are we good?
Big Lantern Ghost: Oh yes! Indeed! Now then… Wee hee hee… What exactly do you have on your mind…?
Red: See, we heard that you kidnapped one of Mario's friends a while back, so I was wondering if you'll do it again… And maybe kidnap the rest of 'em.
Big Lantern Ghost: Ah… You mean the infant who is smooth and electrifying to the touch…? For a proposition, like this one… I will gladly do this without price… Of course, to effectively make the most of my services... I require just a handful of… Favors…
(Yellow is a little skeptical when he was describing Watt, but Red only reacted when he mentioned that he'll do it for free.)
Red: Aw, sweet! Okay then, pal, a few favors for your help is no skin off my nose, so shoot.
Big Lantern Ghost: Wee hee hee… I am ever so glad you are willing to do this… Now then… My first request is that one of you should take these supplies to the town's chef... Make sure that she cooks them all up into something yummy…
(The Big Lantern Ghost shows the Koopa Bros. a pile of multiple items. There are pitchers of Honey Syrup, Fire Flowers, Volt Shrooms, Lemons, Limes, Coconuts, and Jars of Jammin' Jelly. Of course, most of the pile consists of bags of Cake Mix. Yellow is a little uneasy by what he sees.)
Red: Mmm… mind if I have some of those treats for myself?
Big Lantern Ghost: Of course… I wanted those made to share with others… Now then… For my second task… I would like you take take this paint and use it to give that truck over there a fresh coat of paint…
(He hands the Koopa Bros two cans of white paint and points to a life-sized toy truck. Red is annoyed by the prospect of manual labor, while Yellow is sweating.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Once you two are done with your chores… We can then force my truck outside the Toy Box and into the real world… Since the house that contains this world is in a neighborhood… This will allow my plan to be almost instantly set in motion… Wee hee hee hee…
Red: Whatever, dude! As long as it means that we'll kidnap that baby sun thing and the rest of those chuckle-heads, I'm up for pretty much anyth-
(Yellow couldn't stand it any longer and grabs Red by the collar to drag him out of the room.)
Yellow: NOPE! NO! No! No! NO! We're done here, Red!
Red: Ack! Yellow! What are you doing!? Just when things are about to get goo-
Yellow: I said… WE'RE DONE HERE!
(It cuts outside where Yellow is still dragging a ranting Red. Green manages to catch up when he notices his two friends goign in the opposite direction. He don't know what to make of it, but then he catches the eye of the Big Lantern Ghost leaving his room.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Wait! Come back, my friends! We have so much to cover and no one else was willing to help me with my deeds!
(Green is still confused by what is going on, but he suddenly notices a wanted poster on a nearby wall. After a careful look, it turns out that it is a wanted poster for the Big Lantern Ghost. Green looks at the Big Lantern Ghost and tilts his head in an awkward way.)
***
(The scene cuts back to the outside of the Koopa Bros. Fortress. Yellow is still dragging Red, but he suddenly drops him in front.)
Red: What was that for, Yellow!? Everything was going well until you ruined it!
Yellow: Seriously, Red!? If you take into account of what happened today, I don't want to hear anything negative coming out of your mouth! Not only did you blotch up a perfectly good chance of a sneak attack, but I ended up getting thrashed by some psychotic father over a BROKEN GATE that YOU broke! Then, you paid some condescending mercenary some money that wasn't even yours to begin with, just so that he could be easily defeated by a completely stupid weakness! If that's not bad enough, you completely destroyed Black's advantage TWICE IN THE SAME BATTLE! I was already stressed out by Black leaving the team, but when you were completely oblivious to to all those red flags that Lantern Ghost guy gave off, I didn't want to have any part of that! What's worse is that you're acting like I messed up something really big here when I was trying to SAVE YOU from doing something COMPLETELY STUPID that would land you in MORE TROUBLE than even kidnapping any of Mario's party members! Heck, not even Bowser of all people would stoop to that kind of low that creep was trying to!
(Yellow is out of breath at this point, while Red is shocked and emotionally hurt.)
Yellow: Look, Red… I'm sorry that I came off as overly harsh. I just had a stressful day and I only want to cut the losses at that and move on. I'm not going to leave you or think of you less as a friend, but you gotta understand that some ideas aren't always the best and continuing them are just not worth it sometimes. I know I was the one who partially suggested the kidnapping idea, and I regret the whole thing. If you'll excuse me, Red, I need to watch some TV to cool myself off before I think of any reasonable ideas to deal with Mario.
(Yellow enters the fortress. Red then looking at the ground and walks inside shamefully. The scene cuts to the first corridor of the fortress with the cells and the upper block shifting puzzle. Red is still walking in that regretful way. He eventually passes Yellow, who is tied up and gaged. Red does not take much notice of it at first, but when he finally realizes it, he jumps back to make a double take.)
Red: YELLOW! WHO DID THIS TO YOU!?
???: *Says this when Red says "you"* Oh!
(Red looks around for the source of the voice, but when he manages to look up, he is surprised to see Mario sitting up on the higher part of the corridor. He then jumps down from it to be at Red's level.)
Red: What the-!? How did you even… Oh no… Don't tell me… You were watching us the whole time, weren't you?
*Note: Mario actually hides in several parts of the scenes throughout this short.*
Mario: *Nods his head* Mm-hmm.
Red: …… And I take it that you want to beat me up for all the trouble I caused, right?
Mario: *Cracks his knuckles* Mm-hmm…
Red: Oh boy… Ummmm… Any chance of mercy if I promise to never treat my friends or anyone else like dirt again? Come on! I'll even kiss your feet and everything! What do you say, buddy?
Mario: *Thinks about it for a bit, but shakes his head* Nn-nnn.
(Red only looks that the camera straight on with an expression that shows that he is in major trouble.)
*Credits*
(After the credits, Green enters the same corridor with a big bag of coins.)
Green: Guess what, guys? I just captured some weird ghost guy and got a heck of a lot of money as a bounty on him! I bet we could use this to repair the fortress and hire a lot of our guys back, including Bla…
(The camera shifts to a brutally beaten Red, while an untied Yellow is nursing him back to health.)
Green: Errrr… Heh, heh… Maybe now's not the best time to bring that up…
(Green walks backwards and closes the door behind him.)
Red: Any other bright ideas, guys?
Green: Personally, I don't think we're getting much luck with kidnapping any of Mario's party, so how abotu tryign a new plan?
Red: ……….. Any other bright ideas, Yellow?
Yellow: It not like those two are the only guys on Mario's team, so how about trying our luck with the rest of them?
Red: Hm, not a bad idea! We should be able to nick at least one of them. So… Going to Lavalava Island is a no-go since none of us can't swim and there ain't anyone in Toad Town willing to take the likes of us there…
(Green makes a comment about how he can swim, while Red was talking. Obviously, he was ignored.)
Yellow: Don't forget that we aren't exactly welcome in Koopa Village, so that crosses off two more on the list.
Red: Hmmm… What about that guy who keeps calling himself Spike?
Green: You mean Lakilester? Isn't he the guy with that scary girlfriend?
Yellow: Oh yeah… The last guy who looked at him funny ended up having a Spiny Egg surgically removed.
Red: Yeesh! Okay, so that doofus is out! How about that ghost chick? What's her name? Lady Boo?
Yellow: Lady Bow, Red. Still, she is a Boo, so I get why you'd get her name confused.
Green: Wait, isn't she the owner of that haunted house near the edge of the Forever Forest?
Red: Well, where else would a ghost live, ya Scaredy Rat?
Green: No, it's not that! It's just that the guy who guides travelers through the forest has gone into hiding ever since people took note of him making frequent trips to the bushes outside of that ghost house. They said that he sped right through town dropping a trail of Strange Leaves the moment they saw Tayce T. getting woozy after baking too many of those Strange Cakes for him. Without that leafy guy's help, getting through the Forever Forest is really difficult now.
Red: Grrr…
(Red lunges at Green and grabs him by the neck.)
Red: Gosh darn it, Green! Must you be a buzzkill!? I'm sick of telling why we can't kidnap any of Mairo's partners!
Green: *Franticly* Wait-wait-wait! There's Watt! There's Watt!
(Red lets go of Green out of confusion.)
Red: What?
Yellow: He means Watt as in the yellow baby sun thing. Mario saved her from some ghost who kidnapped her a while back.
Red: Kidnapped, eh? *Grins and rubs hands together* What are you waiting for, boys!? If we play our cards right, we might get a professional kidnapper on our team to take care of the rest of those chumps! To the Toy Box!
(Red and Yellow rush out of the room, while Green is picks himself and breaths heavily. He then slowly walks forward.)
***
(The scene cuts to the outside of the Big Lantern Ghost's room in Shy Guy's Toy Box. The scene cuts again to the inside of it, which is extremely dark.)
???: Wee hee hee hee… Glad you could join me… In the dark…
Red: No offense, dude, but there's no way we'll be able to work out a deal when it's so pitch black, like this.
(There is the sound of a light switch clicking as the lights in the room turn on. It is revealed that Red has activated a comically large light switch and he is accompanied by Yellow and the Big Lantern Ghost.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Gah! I hate the light!
Yellow: Be reasonable, man. We'll let you return to the darkness once we finish our business here. Are we good?
Big Lantern Ghost: Oh yes! Indeed! Now then… Wee hee hee… What exactly do you have on your mind…?
Red: See, we heard that you kidnapped one of Mario's friends a while back, so I was wondering if you'll do it again… And maybe kidnap the rest of 'em.
Big Lantern Ghost: Ah… You mean the infant who is smooth and electrifying to the touch…? For a proposition, like this one… I will gladly do this without price… Of course, to effectively make the most of my services... I require just a handful of… Favors…
(Yellow is a little skeptical when he was describing Watt, but Red only reacted when he mentioned that he'll do it for free.)
Red: Aw, sweet! Okay then, pal, a few favors for your help is no skin off my nose, so shoot.
Big Lantern Ghost: Wee hee hee… I am ever so glad you are willing to do this… Now then… My first request is that one of you should take these supplies to the town's chef... Make sure that she cooks them all up into something yummy…
(The Big Lantern Ghost shows the Koopa Bros. a pile of multiple items. There are pitchers of Honey Syrup, Fire Flowers, Volt Shrooms, Lemons, Limes, Coconuts, and Jars of Jammin' Jelly. Of course, most of the pile consists of bags of Cake Mix. Yellow is a little uneasy by what he sees.)
Red: Mmm… mind if I have some of those treats for myself?
Big Lantern Ghost: Of course… I wanted those made to share with others… Now then… For my second task… I would like you take take this paint and use it to give that truck over there a fresh coat of paint…
(He hands the Koopa Bros two cans of white paint and points to a life-sized toy truck. Red is annoyed by the prospect of manual labor, while Yellow is sweating.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Once you two are done with your chores… We can then force my truck outside the Toy Box and into the real world… Since the house that contains this world is in a neighborhood… This will allow my plan to be almost instantly set in motion… Wee hee hee hee…
Red: Whatever, dude! As long as it means that we'll kidnap that baby sun thing and the rest of those chuckle-heads, I'm up for pretty much anyth-
(Yellow couldn't stand it any longer and grabs Red by the collar to drag him out of the room.)
Yellow: NOPE! NO! No! No! NO! We're done here, Red!
Red: Ack! Yellow! What are you doing!? Just when things are about to get goo-
Yellow: I said… WE'RE DONE HERE!
(It cuts outside where Yellow is still dragging a ranting Red. Green manages to catch up when he notices his two friends goign in the opposite direction. He don't know what to make of it, but then he catches the eye of the Big Lantern Ghost leaving his room.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Wait! Come back, my friends! We have so much to cover and no one else was willing to help me with my deeds!
(Green is still confused by what is going on, but he suddenly notices a wanted poster on a nearby wall. After a careful look, it turns out that it is a wanted poster for the Big Lantern Ghost. Green looks at the Big Lantern Ghost and tilts his head in an awkward way.)
***
(The scene cuts back to the outside of the Koopa Bros. Fortress. Yellow is still dragging Red, but he suddenly drops him in front.)
Red: What was that for, Yellow!? Everything was going well until you ruined it!
Yellow: Seriously, Red!? If you take into account of what happened today, I don't want to hear anything negative coming out of your mouth! Not only did you blotch up a perfectly good chance of a sneak attack, but I ended up getting thrashed by some psychotic father over a BROKEN GATE that YOU broke! Then, you paid some condescending mercenary some money that wasn't even yours to begin with, just so that he could be easily defeated by a completely stupid weakness! If that's not bad enough, you completely destroyed Black's advantage TWICE IN THE SAME BATTLE! I was already stressed out by Black leaving the team, but when you were completely oblivious to to all those red flags that Lantern Ghost guy gave off, I didn't want to have any part of that! What's worse is that you're acting like I messed up something really big here when I was trying to SAVE YOU from doing something COMPLETELY STUPID that would land you in MORE TROUBLE than even kidnapping any of Mario's party members! Heck, not even Bowser of all people would stoop to that kind of low that creep was trying to!
(Yellow is out of breath at this point, while Red is shocked and emotionally hurt.)
Yellow: Look, Red… I'm sorry that I came off as overly harsh. I just had a stressful day and I only want to cut the losses at that and move on. I'm not going to leave you or think of you less as a friend, but you gotta understand that some ideas aren't always the best and continuing them are just not worth it sometimes. I know I was the one who partially suggested the kidnapping idea, and I regret the whole thing. If you'll excuse me, Red, I need to watch some TV to cool myself off before I think of any reasonable ideas to deal with Mario.
(Yellow enters the fortress. Red then looking at the ground and walks inside shamefully. The scene cuts to the first corridor of the fortress with the cells and the upper block shifting puzzle. Red is still walking in that regretful way. He eventually passes Yellow, who is tied up and gaged. Red does not take much notice of it at first, but when he finally realizes it, he jumps back to make a double take.)
Red: YELLOW! WHO DID THIS TO YOU!?
???: *Says this when Red says "you"* Oh!
(Red looks around for the source of the voice, but when he manages to look up, he is surprised to see Mario sitting up on the higher part of the corridor. He then jumps down from it to be at Red's level.)
Red: What the-!? How did you even… Oh no… Don't tell me… You were watching us the whole time, weren't you?
*Note: Mario actually hides in several parts of the scenes throughout this short.*
Mario: *Nods his head* Mm-hmm.
Red: …… And I take it that you want to beat me up for all the trouble I caused, right?
Mario: *Cracks his knuckles* Mm-hmm…
Red: Oh boy… Ummmm… Any chance of mercy if I promise to never treat my friends or anyone else like dirt again? Come on! I'll even kiss your feet and everything! What do you say, buddy?
Mario: *Thinks about it for a bit, but shakes his head* Nn-nnn.
(Red only looks that the camera straight on with an expression that shows that he is in major trouble.)
*Credits*
(After the credits, Green enters the same corridor with a big bag of coins.)
Green: Guess what, guys? I just captured some weird ghost guy and got a heck of a lot of money as a bounty on him! I bet we could use this to repair the fortress and hire a lot of our guys back, including Bla…
(The camera shifts to a brutally beaten Red, while an untied Yellow is nursing him back to health.)
Green: Errrr… Heh, heh… Maybe now's not the best time to bring that up…
(Green walks backwards and closes the door behind him.)
Refs
http://www.vg-resource.com/thread-24880-...#pid547187
Secret Santa Gift
http://i.imgur.com/ePmc4yd.jpg
Ploaj
http://i.imgur.com/HlQpqzO.png
Chris
http://i.imgur.com/jTu4R2O.png
http://www.vg-resource.com/thread-24880-...#pid547187
Secret Santa Gift
http://i.imgur.com/ePmc4yd.jpg
Ploaj
http://i.imgur.com/HlQpqzO.png
Chris
http://i.imgur.com/jTu4R2O.png
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