08-13-2015, 08:22 AM
@ E-man
That Goomba reminds me more like the oddly off-model Goomba from Superstar Saga then a Paper Mario Goomba. Then again, my senses of minor nitpicks might be happening again.
You also toned down Kent C Koopa by a great amount. Even with the glasses, he'll look really off-model. The proper design has his eye mask really small, along with a big upwards pointing snout.
Just keep trying 'till you get them right. Since drawing them the way you think will give bad results. Also, I'd suggest you to draw with less sketchy lines, as I think that should be a standard for drawing art that needs to be cleaned up. No need for the clean-up artist to have to guess what lines need to be inked because the main artist was too srcibbly and stiff with their line work.
That Goomba reminds me more like the oddly off-model Goomba from Superstar Saga then a Paper Mario Goomba. Then again, my senses of minor nitpicks might be happening again.
You also toned down Kent C Koopa by a great amount. Even with the glasses, he'll look really off-model. The proper design has his eye mask really small, along with a big upwards pointing snout.
Just keep trying 'till you get them right. Since drawing them the way you think will give bad results. Also, I'd suggest you to draw with less sketchy lines, as I think that should be a standard for drawing art that needs to be cleaned up. No need for the clean-up artist to have to guess what lines need to be inked because the main artist was too srcibbly and stiff with their line work.