You raise a good point, so I'll do that when I compile all the script pieces into one full script. I won't do it on this post because I don't want it to get cluttered with the final script piece I'll rewrite.
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Speaking of which, it's right here!
(The scene cuts to the outside of the Big Lantern Ghost's room in Shy Guy's Toy Box. The scene cuts again to the inside of it, which is pitch black.)
???: Wee hee hee hee… Glad you could join me… In the dark…
Red: Okay… When I was hopin' to seal the deal, I wasn't THINKIN' it would be in a place where I can't even SEE my own dang HAND in front of my face!
(There is the sound of a light switch clicking as the lights in the room turn on. It is revealed that Red activated a comically large light switch and he is accompanied by Yellow and the Big Lantern Ghost.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Gah! I hate the light!
Yellow: Please understand that we need your help. After we finalize the details, you can spend at least another moment alone in the dark.
Big Lantern Ghost: Oh yes! How reasonable! Now then… Wee hee hee… What exactly are you proposing to me…?
Red: See, we heard you nabbed a certain brat years ago, so ya think you'll do it again along with snatching the rest of a certain plumber's gang of chumps?
Big Lantern Ghost: Ah… When you mentioned a brat, did you mean the infant who is smooth and electrifying to the touch…? For a proposition, like this one… I will gladly do this without price… Of course, to effectively make the most of my services... I require just a handful of… Favors…
(Yellow is a little skeptical when the Big Lantern Ghost was describing Watt, but Red only reacted when he mentioned that he'll do it for free.)
Red: FOR FREE!? Sounds radical, Sheetboy! Sure, a bit of manual labor sounds really drab, but I'm up for it as long as I get results!
Big Lantern Ghost: Wee hee hee… I am ever so glad you are willing to do this… Now then… My first request is that one of you deliver these supplies to the town's chef... Make sure that she cooks them all up into yummy treats…
(The Big Lantern Ghost shows the two Koopa Bros. a pile of multiple items. There are pitchers of Honey Syrup, Fire Flowers, Volt Shrooms, Lemons, Limes, Coconuts, and Jars of Jammin' Jelly. Of course, most of the pile consists of bags of Cake Mix. Yellow is a little uneasy by what he sees.)
Red: Mmm… Mind if I have some of those munchies?
Big Lantern Ghost: Of course… I wanted those made to share with others… Now then… For my second task… I would like you take take this paint and use it to give that truck over there a fresh coat of paint…
(He hands Red and Yellow two cans of white paint and points to a life-sized toy truck. Red is visibly annoyed, while Yellow is sweating.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Once you two are done with your chores… We can then force the truck outside the Toy Box and into the real world… Since the house that contains this world is in a neighborhood… This will allow my plan to be almost instantly set in motion… Wee hee hee hee…
Red: Whatever, Ghost Guy! As long as it's easy and FOOLPROOF, I'm up for any bit of this plan to catch the rest of those-
(Yellow couldn't stand it any longer and grabs Red by the collar to drag him out of the room.)
Yellow: NOPE! NO! No! No! NO! We're done here, Red!
Red: ACK! YELLOW! How come you ain't smart enough to see a good gig, like thi-
Yellow: I said… WE'RE DONE HERE!
(It cuts outside where Yellow is still dragging a ranting Red. Green manages to catch up when he notices his two friends going in the opposite direction. He doesn't know what to make of it, but then he catches sight of the Big Lantern Ghost leaving his room.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Wait! Come back, my friends! We have so much to cover and no one else was willing to help me with this task!
(Green is still confused by what is going on, but he suddenly notices a wanted poster on a nearby wall. After a careful look, it turns out that it is a wanted poster for the Big Lantern Ghost. Green looks at the Big Lantern Ghost and tilts his head in an awkward way.)
***
(The scene cuts back to the outside of the Koopa Bros. Fortress. Yellow is still dragging Red, but he suddenly drops him in front as he makes his way inside.)
Red: WHAT GIVES!? Don't tell me that green dumb cluck's rubbin' of on ya!
Yellow: *Under his breath* Black really is right about his thickness… I need a break...
(Yellow opens the doors and they slam behind him. Red just stands there clueless for a bit, but he decides to follow him inside. The scene then cuts to the first corridor of the fortress with the cells and the upper block shifting puzzle. Red walking around looking for Yellow.)
Red: Yellow, ya there? Dunno what's got ya so cheesed, but it can't be my bad, right? *Pauses and starts gettign worried* Right? *Sees Yellow tied up and gaged* Okay… I'll just let you get back to… Whatever this is… *Turns around and walks away* I knew that guy had a screw loose… *Suddenly stops and then makes a double take at Yellow* HWAIT A SEC! WHO DID THIS TO YOU!?
???: *Says this when Red says "you"* Oh!
(Red frantically looks around for the source of the voice, but when he manages to look up, he is surprised to see Mario sitting up on the higher part of the corridor. He then jumps down to be at Red's level.)
Red: WAHH! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?
Mario: *As he uses body language to simulate talking* Oh-ho.
Red: So, what you're tellin' me is that you were spyin' on me and my compadres this whole time and you're here to punch my lights out.
*Note: Mario actually hides in several parts of the scenes throughout this short.*
Mario: *Cracks his knuckles and nods* Mm-hmm…
Red: *Looks at the camera* Oh boy… How do I always end up in deep Goomba dung?
*Credits*
(After the credits, Green enters the same corridor with a big bag of coins.)
Green: Guess what, dudes? I just snagged some weird ghost guy and got some serious coinage from a bounty! Not only is it enough to patch the fort up, but we can even grease Black's palms to...
(Green notices a brutally beaten Red, while Yellow is free from his bonds as he's nursing Red back to health.)
Green: Errrr… Heh, heh… Sorry, bros… Didn't know it was a bad time…
(Green walks backwards and closes the door behind him.)
???: Wee hee hee hee… Glad you could join me… In the dark…
Red: Okay… When I was hopin' to seal the deal, I wasn't THINKIN' it would be in a place where I can't even SEE my own dang HAND in front of my face!
(There is the sound of a light switch clicking as the lights in the room turn on. It is revealed that Red activated a comically large light switch and he is accompanied by Yellow and the Big Lantern Ghost.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Gah! I hate the light!
Yellow: Please understand that we need your help. After we finalize the details, you can spend at least another moment alone in the dark.
Big Lantern Ghost: Oh yes! How reasonable! Now then… Wee hee hee… What exactly are you proposing to me…?
Red: See, we heard you nabbed a certain brat years ago, so ya think you'll do it again along with snatching the rest of a certain plumber's gang of chumps?
Big Lantern Ghost: Ah… When you mentioned a brat, did you mean the infant who is smooth and electrifying to the touch…? For a proposition, like this one… I will gladly do this without price… Of course, to effectively make the most of my services... I require just a handful of… Favors…
(Yellow is a little skeptical when the Big Lantern Ghost was describing Watt, but Red only reacted when he mentioned that he'll do it for free.)
Red: FOR FREE!? Sounds radical, Sheetboy! Sure, a bit of manual labor sounds really drab, but I'm up for it as long as I get results!
Big Lantern Ghost: Wee hee hee… I am ever so glad you are willing to do this… Now then… My first request is that one of you deliver these supplies to the town's chef... Make sure that she cooks them all up into yummy treats…
(The Big Lantern Ghost shows the two Koopa Bros. a pile of multiple items. There are pitchers of Honey Syrup, Fire Flowers, Volt Shrooms, Lemons, Limes, Coconuts, and Jars of Jammin' Jelly. Of course, most of the pile consists of bags of Cake Mix. Yellow is a little uneasy by what he sees.)
Red: Mmm… Mind if I have some of those munchies?
Big Lantern Ghost: Of course… I wanted those made to share with others… Now then… For my second task… I would like you take take this paint and use it to give that truck over there a fresh coat of paint…
(He hands Red and Yellow two cans of white paint and points to a life-sized toy truck. Red is visibly annoyed, while Yellow is sweating.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Once you two are done with your chores… We can then force the truck outside the Toy Box and into the real world… Since the house that contains this world is in a neighborhood… This will allow my plan to be almost instantly set in motion… Wee hee hee hee…
Red: Whatever, Ghost Guy! As long as it's easy and FOOLPROOF, I'm up for any bit of this plan to catch the rest of those-
(Yellow couldn't stand it any longer and grabs Red by the collar to drag him out of the room.)
Yellow: NOPE! NO! No! No! NO! We're done here, Red!
Red: ACK! YELLOW! How come you ain't smart enough to see a good gig, like thi-
Yellow: I said… WE'RE DONE HERE!
(It cuts outside where Yellow is still dragging a ranting Red. Green manages to catch up when he notices his two friends going in the opposite direction. He doesn't know what to make of it, but then he catches sight of the Big Lantern Ghost leaving his room.)
Big Lantern Ghost: Wait! Come back, my friends! We have so much to cover and no one else was willing to help me with this task!
(Green is still confused by what is going on, but he suddenly notices a wanted poster on a nearby wall. After a careful look, it turns out that it is a wanted poster for the Big Lantern Ghost. Green looks at the Big Lantern Ghost and tilts his head in an awkward way.)
***
(The scene cuts back to the outside of the Koopa Bros. Fortress. Yellow is still dragging Red, but he suddenly drops him in front as he makes his way inside.)
Red: WHAT GIVES!? Don't tell me that green dumb cluck's rubbin' of on ya!
Yellow: *Under his breath* Black really is right about his thickness… I need a break...
(Yellow opens the doors and they slam behind him. Red just stands there clueless for a bit, but he decides to follow him inside. The scene then cuts to the first corridor of the fortress with the cells and the upper block shifting puzzle. Red walking around looking for Yellow.)
Red: Yellow, ya there? Dunno what's got ya so cheesed, but it can't be my bad, right? *Pauses and starts gettign worried* Right? *Sees Yellow tied up and gaged* Okay… I'll just let you get back to… Whatever this is… *Turns around and walks away* I knew that guy had a screw loose… *Suddenly stops and then makes a double take at Yellow* HWAIT A SEC! WHO DID THIS TO YOU!?
???: *Says this when Red says "you"* Oh!
(Red frantically looks around for the source of the voice, but when he manages to look up, he is surprised to see Mario sitting up on the higher part of the corridor. He then jumps down to be at Red's level.)
Red: WAHH! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?
Mario: *As he uses body language to simulate talking* Oh-ho.
Red: So, what you're tellin' me is that you were spyin' on me and my compadres this whole time and you're here to punch my lights out.
*Note: Mario actually hides in several parts of the scenes throughout this short.*
Mario: *Cracks his knuckles and nods* Mm-hmm…
Red: *Looks at the camera* Oh boy… How do I always end up in deep Goomba dung?
*Credits*
(After the credits, Green enters the same corridor with a big bag of coins.)
Green: Guess what, dudes? I just snagged some weird ghost guy and got some serious coinage from a bounty! Not only is it enough to patch the fort up, but we can even grease Black's palms to...
(Green notices a brutally beaten Red, while Yellow is free from his bonds as he's nursing Red back to health.)
Green: Errrr… Heh, heh… Sorry, bros… Didn't know it was a bad time…
(Green walks backwards and closes the door behind him.)
Refs
http://www.vg-resource.com/thread-24880-...#pid547187
Secret Santa Gift
http://i.imgur.com/ePmc4yd.jpg
Ploaj
http://i.imgur.com/HlQpqzO.png
Chris
http://i.imgur.com/jTu4R2O.png
http://www.vg-resource.com/thread-24880-...#pid547187
Secret Santa Gift
http://i.imgur.com/ePmc4yd.jpg
Ploaj
http://i.imgur.com/HlQpqzO.png
Chris
http://i.imgur.com/jTu4R2O.png
(02-27-2014, 07:31 PM)Gors Wrote: DO NOT BE AFRAID TO SUCK. DO NOT BE AFRAID TO SHOW YOUR SUCKY ART. I think this needs to go noticed to everyone, because sucking is not failing. Sucking is part of the fun of learning and if you don't suck, then you won't own at pixelart
it's ok to suck, sucking is not bad, just try and aim to always do your best!