11-17-2016, 05:20 PM
That's a lot and I do mean A LOT! Alright... this is going to be a bunch of feedback.
Firstly, Mario's hat looks to big in the front view compared to the mario hat you have in the 3/4 view. For the back view of Mario's head use C for the hair tufts and with the hair on the back of his head use A but make it smaller at the chin part. I prefer the smaller nose for mario.
Secondly, with the third hammer make a circle at the end of the handle. Can you make the cartoony running feet darker? The upper part of mario's overalls on the 1/4 view looks weird, I would change the shape from this: \/ to one of these: \| - \_|.
Thirdly, so that's why goomba's smile looks like that, I don't watch the Lonely Goomba so I wouldn't know and the default smile looks good enough. I would make the goomba wing on the left side move more to the right. The helmet's trim on both the 1/4 view and back view should go lower.
Lastly, The helmet's trim on the 1/4 view looks to symmetric, bend the curve more to the right side. That's not exactly what I meant with the left-bottom corner of goompapa's moustache and now the bump on the left-top corner is pointy instead of gone. I meant more like this
Everything I haven't mentioned are either A fine or B I don't know. How far are you actually with your first short? I'm just wondering, that's all.
Firstly, Mario's hat looks to big in the front view compared to the mario hat you have in the 3/4 view. For the back view of Mario's head use C for the hair tufts and with the hair on the back of his head use A but make it smaller at the chin part. I prefer the smaller nose for mario.
Secondly, with the third hammer make a circle at the end of the handle. Can you make the cartoony running feet darker? The upper part of mario's overalls on the 1/4 view looks weird, I would change the shape from this: \/ to one of these: \| - \_|.
Thirdly, so that's why goomba's smile looks like that, I don't watch the Lonely Goomba so I wouldn't know and the default smile looks good enough. I would make the goomba wing on the left side move more to the right. The helmet's trim on both the 1/4 view and back view should go lower.
Lastly, The helmet's trim on the 1/4 view looks to symmetric, bend the curve more to the right side. That's not exactly what I meant with the left-bottom corner of goompapa's moustache and now the bump on the left-top corner is pointy instead of gone. I meant more like this
Everything I haven't mentioned are either A fine or B I don't know. How far are you actually with your first short? I'm just wondering, that's all.