04-22-2017, 06:19 AM
You're pumping out some quality work! I especially like the Midnight Moe animation, it's one of your best so far. It's awesome to see improvement like this.
Anyway, back to the portrait:
Changed a few discrepancies, like adding the lacking blue armpad and shoulderpad. You may notice I lowered the shoulder, as your character was looking quite squat (forced perspective?), and I tried giving more volume to the chest, as it looked quite flat before - you may note that JJBA characters have this strange pectoral thing going which is not so much a board with rounded edges, but a simplified and merged shape of the pecs, with a straight edge along the bottom. I messed around with the face a tiny bit, to get a more neutral expression.
I hope it helps somehow, I'm looking forward to more!
Anyway, back to the portrait:
Changed a few discrepancies, like adding the lacking blue armpad and shoulderpad. You may notice I lowered the shoulder, as your character was looking quite squat (forced perspective?), and I tried giving more volume to the chest, as it looked quite flat before - you may note that JJBA characters have this strange pectoral thing going which is not so much a board with rounded edges, but a simplified and merged shape of the pecs, with a straight edge along the bottom. I messed around with the face a tiny bit, to get a more neutral expression.
I hope it helps somehow, I'm looking forward to more!