06-05-2020, 01:38 PM
Hey! Thanks for posting this!
Just glancing at it, the body of the Eggmobile actually looks pretty good. It might need some shading help, but the shape and color is fine.
Most of the issues are;
1. The tube under the craft needs better shading.
2. The mines (?) need definition and detail
3. There is way too much blank space and unnecessary sprites in the credit tag.
For more help, I'd suggest contacting someone like Dolphman on the Discord. He has a lot of practice in this department and could give you some pointers!
Just glancing at it, the body of the Eggmobile actually looks pretty good. It might need some shading help, but the shape and color is fine.
Most of the issues are;
1. The tube under the craft needs better shading.
2. The mines (?) need definition and detail
3. There is way too much blank space and unnecessary sprites in the credit tag.
For more help, I'd suggest contacting someone like Dolphman on the Discord. He has a lot of practice in this department and could give you some pointers!