Is this acceptable? (Sonic R Eggmobile)

[DogToon64]

My sprite sheet for the Sonic R Eggmobile got rejected. So I changed some things on it, and added a Sonic 2 style. How does it look now?

   

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It'd be kind if you'd take the survey up above as well as commenting saying if it's good or not

[Ton]

Hey! Thanks for posting this!

Just glancing at it, the body of the Eggmobile actually looks pretty good. It might need some shading help, but the shape and color is fine.
Most of the issues are;

1. The tube under the craft needs better shading.
2. The mines (?) need definition and detail
3. There is way too much blank space and unnecessary sprites in the credit tag.

For more help, I'd suggest contacting someone like Dolphman on the Discord. He has a lot of practice in this department and could give you some pointers!

[DogToon64]

Thanks for the suggestions, but I'd rather not go to discord, but I can PM Dolphman here on the VG resource. Thanks Ton
I'll reduce some of the extra sprites, and I had a difficult time deciding on how to do the Sonic 2 shading, so that's what I went with