02-20-2009, 02:58 PM
Now you're pillowshading the Triforce. You want to shade as if there's a definitive light source. You're best off shading as if the light source is to the upper-left or upper-right side of the sprite. Also the blade of the swords are still too straight.
Homer looks like he has to go to the bathroom, and is crossing his legs to help "hold it in." His far foot should be drawn the same as the close foot, perhaps a bit more of a side-view. This way, it looks more like a front-view, so it looks like he's crossing his legs. Also, the way the crotch is drawn contributes to the "crossed-legs" illusion. And his far leg should be more behind the close leg. You also need to make the feet wider. They're hardly wider than the thickness of his legs.
Homer looks like he has to go to the bathroom, and is crossing his legs to help "hold it in." His far foot should be drawn the same as the close foot, perhaps a bit more of a side-view. This way, it looks more like a front-view, so it looks like he's crossing his legs. Also, the way the crotch is drawn contributes to the "crossed-legs" illusion. And his far leg should be more behind the close leg. You also need to make the feet wider. They're hardly wider than the thickness of his legs.