[Art] First topic didn't go well here

[Zee]

Headband Guy - Check
Anti-Hero in Mask - Check
Guy with Sword - Check
Completely Bland Pose - Check
Inverted Pectorals - Check
Only one set of eyes visible between them - Check
Only one hand between them - Check
Cliche Trench Coat - Check
Cliche Tough Smoker - Check
Cliche SQUARE MAN CHIN - Check
Back Left Guy with torso equally long as legs - Check
Cover parts you don't feel like drawing - Check

Maybe you out to focus on one character and make it appealing.