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it looks bad, and we already told you what could be fixed. sorry if we find that working over a pre existing sprite is hard.
however, if you ever want a word of advice, don't take every comment and/or critique personally. learn to live with them, and you'll see yourself improving in no time.
Aside from the fact that it's a SMW Mario edit, it doesn't look anything like Olimar.
![[Image: smwolimar.png]](http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/7440/smwolimar.png)
Maybe something more like this.
I did some major editing to the head, making it more oblong.
For the body, I took Small Mario's body and edited it, since it's much closer to the size of Olimar's body.
It's not the best example, since I'm sure I've broken SMW rules somewhere in here, but try using it as a base for more Olimar sprites.
And don't just give up spriting because people said your first sprite is crap. It's your first sprite. Keep practicing, and actually listen to the critique you receive. It can help you improve.
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I think somone should lock this,he is long gone...
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12-10-2009, 10:34 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-10-2009, 10:35 PM by Popn'Corn.)
ok, well I thought this was gonna be funny, but it wasn't...
anyway here's the real thing I was working on ;0
WIP
![[Image: olimar.png]](http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/826/olimar.png)
any c&c/c+c is appreciated...
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wow, uh
huge quality jump there
unsure if troll
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troll? more like blatalant artthief.
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(12-10-2009, 06:08 PM)PopnCorn Wrote: It was hard ok?
It was my first time spriting,
I'm not gonna work on this anymore, you people are mean...
it's called constructive criticism. if you can't stand the fact that these people are trying to help you become a decent spriter then don't bother posting here, because despite how "rude" people may come off while posting criticism they're still trying to help you all the same.
also nice job with that olimar if it's actually made by you. if not
inb4mod/admin b&
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(12-10-2009, 10:58 PM)Rhymey Wrote: (12-10-2009, 06:08 PM)PopnCorn Wrote: It was hard ok?
It was my first time spriting,
I'm not gonna work on this anymore, you people are mean...
it's called constructive criticism. if you can't stand the fact that these people are trying to help you become a decent spriter then don't bother posting here, because despite how "rude" people may come off while posting criticism they're still trying to help you all the same.
also nice job with that olimar if it's actually made by you. if not
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Do you get it was a joke?
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i give people benefit of the doubt, so excuse me for being too open. besides i didn't even see the original post
no need to be so hostile :/
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Okay... Um... I'm a little confused. Did he really do that or was this really "a joke"?
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SMW olimar was a joke so he could make a topic beforehand for when he finnised his real work(If it is his)
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he went from
how do i save in PNG
to
semi decent Olimar pixel art.
as a joke.
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I honestly can't help but feel that I've seen that exact pixel art somewhere, but I can't put my finger on it.
My thief alarms are going off, but I can't prove anything.
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sorry guys, I'm not funny hit me...
anyway I'm still waiting for the C&C...
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(12-11-2009, 12:12 AM)EdpR Wrote: sorry guys, I'm not funny hit me...
anyway I'm still waiting for the C&C...
oh, okey, there the same people! Eather he gave it out or logged in to the rong accont
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