Deoxys sprites

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I'm starting a new Deoxys sprite sheet, so tell me what you think about it and what i should add

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3937/deoxys1.png

[Ton]

Needs to be in discussion.

[Teddy The Elite]

1. Colors are wrong. Reference here >http://www.vgblogger.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/18/Deoxys.jpg
2. Stance is awkward. Legs need to be more like he's floating.
3. His "tentacle" arm is too pointy. Smooth it out.

[Vipershark]

those colors are way off

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okay, i edited it according to what you guys said, here it is:

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/3937/deoxys1.png

[Marth]

The pose is odd yet, colors seem a tad better. I don't know much about pokemon but I've seen this thing before and I have to say that this does not resemble the character very well.(unless he transforms or something)

[Jovian-12]

perhaps it'd be good if you made the DNA-ish arm a tighter double helix. right now there's just only one point where they cross over, and even then it's obscured by its leg such that it could look like the two strands aren't crossing at all. perhaps if you coiled it tighter with two or three points of overlap then it'd look less pointy.

[Teddy The Elite]

His body's too thick as well. Especially his arm and legs.

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Third time lucky, as they say

Anyway, here is deoxys, again, edited to how you guys want to be. Hope it's up to your high standards!

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/3937/deoxys1.png

[Rhyme]

Use this:

Code:

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so we don't have to click a link every time. :p

the sprite's looking better however the arm on his left (our right, the hand one) is still a tad thick.

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ok, I made the arm one pixel thinner

anything else?

[Vipershark]

what's with that back leg
it looks deformed

[GaryCXJk]

His pose isn't odd. It's his way to say "I'm pissed off because somebody stole my cute little purse and someone doesn't understand gender equality gosh I'm so pissed I could eat a whole bucket of Ben & Jerry's".

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leg and right arm edit

[Cobalt Blue]

looks like an ape holding a cane.