He has a bomb floating over his head

[[robo9]]

And should stop stealing tid bits and ideas from 1 Up


I tried messing around to add a peering over? I guess animation for Goomba :/



tried to sprite my ref :/


C+C appreciated

[Baegal]

Goomba look very flat when bending over, and your ref's head could have sharper edges, also, dont make his leg a straight line

[[robo9]]

Something I don't really like about it, but :/

C+C?

[Baegal]

your ref's head could have sharper edges, also, dont make his leg a straight line

[[robo9]]

1,2, or 3? And A or B?



Personally I like the 3rd one :/

1 is a stance I saw in a karate class on Main Street, 2 is using Iori as a reference, and 3 is just the back leg of the 2nd one edited to both legs

[Baegal]

1, it adds more movement, and b for the head. You should also make it less tall.

[[robo9]]

Shortened him a few pixels. Also made the regular, idle head. (The other is a angry, or battle pose head) and the first frame of a short, salute taunt.

I think I'll use number 3's legs for idle and attention poses.

[Cobalt Blue]

less black outlines in smaller sprites in favor of using shading to define shapes would do an awesome boost to these small sprites.

[[robo9]]

(The right one hasnt been worked on at all)

Tried following Metaru's advice.

As much as I could, could you explain it a bit? Its going over my head.

Also tried fixing some of the shading.

Im not real satisfied how it turned out, Ill work on it more when I can get on a computer and not an Ipod

[Cobalt Blue]

look at my avatar, it has literally no outlines but instead uses shading in some key parts to give it depth.

[[robo9]]

Okay Meteru.

Top is no outlines, and bottom is no outlines, and trying to shade in key spots to define the shape.

[Jovian-12]

ooh, I really like those now. the bottom moreso.

personally, however, I've found a more orangey color to be good for shading yellow instead of just plain old dark yellow. dark yellow looks pretty icky.

[[robo9]]

Any better?

Also another TSR rep and a MFGG one~