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TOUCANMON
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Toucan fakemon. Still WIP. I want to add chest ruffles and feets but I keep effing it up Very Sad

I imagine this as a dancing, extremely flamboyant toucan.
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#2
it's really flat and the design doesnt have anything that makes it stand out as a pokemon. :V

redo it!!
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#3
also, a bit more texturing, perhaps?
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#4
Shading and size aren't right with Pokemon style, but I dunno if you were going for that style or just a custom one.
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#5
I think you should overdo how toucans are rainbow colored, or try to mix it with another idea, give a basis behind it so there is more to exand on with it's design.
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#6
Updated!

Tried to fix the shading issues. The size fits DPPT style, as does the shading. Also redesigned a bit.
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#7
You need to give it some dynamics man, everything looks so flat like its been hit by a door, and the lines are too broken(the selout) to fit in style, connect some of them.
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#8
Actually the parts of the shading that didn't seem to fit were the spikes on the bottom, so the redesign fixes what I thought. Also, how big is this Pokemon supposed to be? like comparative to other Pokemon? Because, while it may fit DPPt's 80x80 pixel size limit, only large and fully-evolved Pokemon ever take up all of that space. Since a Toucan is a bird and birds are generally small, I think it may be too big. but maybe it's just a really big bird, I don't know.
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#9
yeah it is too big, 80x80 should be the picture size and if it's not suppose to be that big it should be around 60x60 if anything.(the pokemon itself)
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#10
actually, i don't really get the anatomy of that pokemon. is he a pair of wings with a head?
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