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Rob's Pixel crap
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jim is one kerwaii mothafucker

C+C is heavily advised
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The shapes are incredibly simple and plain, the shading lacks contrast, the colors are boring and it generally looks incredibly flat.
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#3
what the gay baby said. unless you're planning to expand on that character in any way, then its pretty much a 5 min desing.
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welp made the head smaller

I tried to make the colors stand out more
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#5
Cute character, however you could add more personality into him to make it more memorable.
I made something small based on your character to show you, it might help a bit.
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I didn't change much with the colours, mostly just the skin. Also, I made it into a hat because I was unsure whether it was one or a helmet. Tongue
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#6
the revamped version looks unbalanced, but it's better overall
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#7
Less angles, less banding, more consistent shading, and less varied contrast are all that is needed.
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(02-22-2010, 10:26 PM)Delicious Wrote: Cute character, however you could add more personality into him to make it more memorable.
I made something small based on your character to show you, it might help a bit.
[Image: preveiw3844248543-iaza.gif]
I didn't change much with the colours, mostly just the skin. Also, I made it into a hat because I was unsure whether it was one or a helmet. Tongue

Its actually a Beanie x:
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tbh Palette is kinda my worst side when it comes to pixel work but this helps!

I made it so it kinda expresses my style of work I guess.
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#9
Good work, looks nice. Smile
Sorry it was a bit unbalanced, I just tried to wip something up to just show a few points.
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#10
wow that is better. More color may give it a better look? I mean like more shades of green on the beanie and you know....
his arms seem a little huge; is it supposed to be like that?
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(02-23-2010, 06:53 PM)Delicious Wrote: Good work, looks nice. Smile
Sorry it was a bit unbalanced, I just tried to wip something up to just show a few points.

It's okay man, its just that I kinda don't want it to look like as if someone else made it, but it was helpful so have a thanks
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