My Kirby costum sprite.
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My Kirby costum sprite.
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Update!
![[Image: z4wvn.png]](http://i28.tinypic.com/z4wvn.png) The mouth and the eyes has been changed. The lines near the arms are gone. And it got now red cheaks. Update! ![[Image: kdtmcg.png]](http://i26.tinypic.com/kdtmcg.png) Update! ![[Image: 2z6axad.png]](http://i31.tinypic.com/2z6axad.png) Update! ![[Image: t4u7af.png]](http://i32.tinypic.com/t4u7af.png)
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07-03-2008, 10:17 AM
Body should be rounder, and the shoes look bad
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07-03-2008, 10:46 AM
DarkKirby Wrote:Euh the boddy is round. Just because you used the MSPaint circle tool doesn't mean it's perfectly round. It looks bumpy.
07-03-2008, 10:49 AM
yeah, he is right, you should make the circles yourself.
07-03-2008, 11:02 AM
Lolwut?
I maked the circle by myself, i maked on side,than kopied than paste,turn en i did it near to is.
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07-03-2008, 11:05 AM
DarkKirby Wrote:Lolwut? Well it doesn't look good. Fix it.
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07-03-2008, 11:09 AM
DarkKirby Wrote:I like it. Fix It
07-03-2008, 11:30 AM
DarkKirby Wrote:I like it. I get it. You one of those people that post a sprite and expcts nothing but praise. And if you get Crit, they'r wrong, because in your own world, everything is perfect, AmIrite? Now, are you going to listen/apply the critique, or be a prick?
What the heck people? If he likes it, he likes it. You can't make someone change their work. Sure it may look better, but you can't really make them. I don't think he is expecting praise either.
He likes it. You don't like it, but is it your decision if he fixes it or not? Definitely not! Here is something else you could work on besides the circle. 1) The Hands kinda don't look right .I think they would look better if they weren't so far apart from the body. 2) The mallet looks good, but it would be better if Kirby could actually swing it instead of holding it. 3) Custom is spelt wrong. I would fix that.
1)Explain
And just lik Whale55 said,i like the body,why would i change it?
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07-03-2008, 01:56 PM
I think your shading of Kirby's body is throwing off how the body looks. You should do a reshading of Kirby's body (including fixing the shading of the colored outline).
You should also fix Kirby's arms and he needs bigger feet. |
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