05-12-2010, 05:38 PM
Only comment on Flannery is that it might do some good to add a LITTLE shadding to the part of her hair that's not put up or bangs. I really don't know how to describe the spot. :p
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05-12-2010, 05:38 PM
Only comment on Flannery is that it might do some good to add a LITTLE shadding to the part of her hair that's not put up or bangs. I really don't know how to describe the spot. :p
05-12-2010, 05:44 PM
the part of hair above her eye? if so there's already shading there, just not a lot since i want it to be noticable due to the back being already dark with shading.
if not then you might have to point it out.
05-12-2010, 05:55 PM
Brawly's hair feels a bit too flat. It feels as if the... left side of his hair should have some shading.
05-12-2010, 05:58 PM
05-12-2010, 06:03 PM
I think Flannery's hair on the front could use a tiny bit of dithering. But all around, they look in-style.
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alright, improved some of brawly's hair, i think it looks fine now, and got rid of the unnessesary black.
and the dither wouldnt work for flannery's front, so it's fine the way it is.
05-12-2010, 06:35 PM
Sweet, it has more 'volume' now.
You're doing an excellent job. You're gonna submit this when you're done, right? Right? Thanked by:
05-12-2010, 06:36 PM
Yes I will, my first custom submission too. (funny how my first and only submission was also hoenn related)
05-12-2010, 08:10 PM
Gosh, these are simply epic. You're really amazing. I can't wait to see the others.
05-12-2010, 08:11 PM
Yeah, the part you're talking about is what I meant. I just thought a little more could be better.
05-12-2010, 08:19 PM
finish these up loyal u fuc
05-12-2010, 08:29 PM
Whoa, dude. That's really good.
05-12-2010, 10:17 PM
I haven't told you recently that I love you.
05-13-2010, 12:30 AM
I have to say that they definitely look great! However, I'd have to say that the girls' hands aren't very feminine; they kinda look like chunky man-hands.
But otherwise, everything looks great. |
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