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to see more of my work just remove the /scarb.bmp
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(modded, phantom, hunter,scorpian and vehichles)
Scarab
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![]() http://www.majhost.com/gallery/JPIC94/sp...scarab.bmp to see more of my work just remove the /scarb.bmp ![]() (modded, phantom, hunter,scorpian and vehichles)
04-05-2010, 09:46 AM
Okay.
1: Don't save it as a Bitmap. The file size is ridiculously huge, so it takes a long time to load up. Also, the site admins won't put it up if it's a Bitmap. 2: These sprites... aren't the best to be honest. I'd show them in Sprite Discussion first and get help on how to make them better before submitting them.
the lineart is good but the shading and color choice is meh at best.
The color on the AA wraith is a bit too red, go for a more purple hue. The color on the scorpion is too bright brown, go for a dirty/darker one.
04-05-2010, 11:08 AM
The shading is very much off.
Also; with large sprites with moving pieces like that; it would be more sensible to just has the pieces; and a single constructed sprite to show how it's put together. Like this: http://www.spriters-resource.com/custom_...heet/26491 That way you don't have a GIANT sheet full of poses that might not even be used. Moved to Sprite Discussion. Thanked by: Rhyme
1st the colours are from the triblox NRE
![]() 2nd all the poses are for walking really so i cant get rid of a few ![]() also currently i am revamping the top of the body of the scarab ![]()
04-05-2010, 02:43 PM
i dont care where the colors came from, i'm trying to give you advice ;/
and by parts he means separate the legs from the base and just put the rotations of the legs so people can paste/move them as they want.
04-05-2010, 03:56 PM
bmp: 12,1 MB
png: 448 kb woah~ Anyway, the png-version: http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/1677/scarab.png
04-05-2010, 04:19 PM
(04-05-2010, 02:08 PM)JPIC94 Wrote: 1st the colours are from the triblox NRE why repeating it twice when you can repeat it... 4 times
04-05-2010, 04:53 PM
lineart's very jagged, and it's in need of a *lot* of cleaning up
I'm curious where you got the AA-Wraiths, though there's a definite quality gap between them and the entire sheet itself :.
ok bit off topic my post got cloned anyhow
if you read the credit above the bonus box it mentions they came from the original Triblox wraith parts which is y they be a different quality and anywho the body be almost redone hopefully when its finished itll match the rest of the body (especially the 2 heads) alot better also thnx 4 pointing out the jaged lining i didnt really notice thatch i left that jagged chunk (good it didnt clone) |
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