mewtwo

[Codestar]

well... since there's a bit of a poke-trend going around I figured i would jump on the bandwagon as well...

WIP obviously

[Mabelma]

Really nice idea, I like the shading so far but his arm could be so straight, I suggest you change the position or bend it a little. The rest of the lineart looks really nice, keep up the great work.

[JarJar]

the mouth/nose looks very un-mewtwoish, it's not suppose to be flat, give him a little nuzzle and shorten the head a bit since it's too long and makes his head bigger than its suppose to be. also remember his mouth is under his nose(like mew), so it's not even suppose to be that noticeable.

[Codestar]

[Mabelma]

That's it, you got it. Keep up the great work I would love to see a few more pokemons from you before you finish with this thread.

[Cytric Acid]

His body looks pillow shaded and the thigh closer to us has a different light source than the head, same with his left (our right) arm. infact, the light source is all over the place.

[Zeeste]

All I have to say is

Boobknees.

[Cobalt Blue]

the left leg does look shorter than it should.

[Jovian-12]

yeah, something bothers me about the legs/lower body but I can't quite pinpoint it. the leg facing us looks a little dislocated, I think?

[Locked Achievement]

His nearest leg seems like its broken, and the outline is too thick compared to the other leg. Nice work though!

[Vipershark]

the leg closest to us appears to just sprout out of his side.

There's really no sort of hips or connectors to show that the legs are actually part of him.

[Codestar]

oh wow... this topic is still going? I'm pretty content with it so I'm not really going to make any changes. I'll still take the crit into concideration, but i don't have any plans to fix any of this atm.