How could I improve it?
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Coco Bandicoot
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04-20-2010, 01:29 AM
- face should be more round
- hair should be smoother - try changing the light source - Overalls could be fixed - ear should be smaller - use a reference pic like :http://www.freewebs.com/hipcrash/Coco.JPG thats all i got. .... but anyways good job so far .... i guess ....
04-20-2010, 01:41 AM
You literally can't. Start over.
Keep in mind basic bodily structure, don't just freehand until you understand how a body works.
I'm not really sure how to crit this
basically, you need refrence the original picture more also, you need to bend your shades around each shape then use dark color to define her features maybe you should start your next sprite by using shapes and going from there, freehand is a really tough route to start at
04-20-2010, 02:25 AM
nice edit
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