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Kirby (now ft. Trilby)
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Colors are from KSSU Kirby.

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I don't like how his outline forms that 'staircase'

make the outline 1 px wide
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I prefer the "staircased" one :/
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Something about the eyes seem off, but i cant quite put my finger on it...

Maybe theyre too tall?

Also, maybe give them a white or light gray highlight at the top.
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when I said to remove the 'staircase', I meant to remove it and use mid-tone colors in its place

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(04-20-2010, 11:12 AM)*Gorsal* Wrote: when I said to remove the 'staircase', I meant to remove it and use mid-tone colors in its place

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Oh, I see. I'm kind of inexperienced as a spriter so I don't know all these cool tricks. Thanks for enlightening me :3
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