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doesnt really need the mouth, and top spike line is messed up, needs to be kinda rounder
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(02-27-2010, 05:27 PM)Subomi Wrote: doesnt really need the mouth, and top spike line is messed up, needs to be kinda rounder

It's a good thing I didin't delete the WIP peices then. *goes to fix*

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Better? Worse?
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MegaMan's eyes dont work on Sonic, I would make them a pixel higher but only 1 pixel wide.
Also, I think the head would look better if you move it one pixel over to the left, so he looks like he's leaning back a bit.

Oh, you could also try to cut down the amount of black lines inside of the sprite, they only make the sprite look cluttered.

Mind if I do an edit?
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(02-27-2010, 06:15 PM)Vic Wrote: MegaMan's eyes dont work on Sonic, I would make them a pixel higher but only 1 pixel wide.
Also, I think the head would look better if you move it one pixel over to the left, so he looks like he's leaning back a bit.

Oh, you could also try to cut down the amount of black lines inside of the sprite, they only make the sprite look cluttered.

Mind if I do an edit?

Yeah, you can. I'm just about done anyway. Tongue

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Eh.
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That front leg is really bothering me. I suggest you separate the legs apart a bit, like in the megaman sprite.
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Yeah, I think this time it's good.. or not.
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It looks a lot better imo, but either try to spread the front leg about a pixel further apart forward, or move the both legs forward a pixel on the body. Not sure if it will solve the problem, but I'd test it out and see what works. =D
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Just felt like random pixeling here. crit if neccessary.
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Hittler follower?
Just playing Not bad, I like it it could fit for a statue
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...And he's missing some legs here. Anyone got suggestions to fix this problem?
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needs more, way more saturation.
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I think he needs a better expression. maybe make his eyes smaller and make his mouth something other than a straight line. he looks kinda blank and dumbfounded, not VE ARH KILLAHS.
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I think the outline is too thick, for the outline, unless your going for a Paper Mario type look.
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(04-26-2010, 11:57 AM)nicktheslayer Wrote: I think the outline is too thick, for the outline, unless your going for a Paper Mario type look.

Yeah, I'm going for that. Trying to get better at it so I can do more complex characters in this style, and might possibly "downgrade" Rawk Hawk in the process.

Jovian-12 Wrote:I think he needs a better expression. maybe make his eyes smaller and make his mouth something other than a straight line. he looks kinda blank and dumbfounded, not VE ARH KILLAHS.

Well, having no expression (expressions might come last, all I need is ideas for the legs first), is something I need to fix. I'll give him that creepeh Petunia look if you want.

Francisco Cifuentes Wrote:needs more, way more saturation.

Yeahh.. not my best works so far, but meh.
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my bad, i clearly missed the part when you explain what the fuck are you exactly doing.

without saturation, it looks quite dull. even if you're taking colors from it, it doesnt mean they will actually work(in fact i'm surprised the sheet looks like that, considering mario looks quite colorful in game).(at least on later paper marios)
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