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what do you guys think? are those colors pleasant for you? i'm not entirely sure and i'm really in need for second opinions.
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The only problem I see is that it's hard to discern between her left hand and the backpack strap
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The blue in her face shading makes her look ill.
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I think the red could maybe use a bit more contrast or something.

Also, what the two above said.
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Cute! the reds are really dull and the blues on the shirt are very vibrant. Not sure which effect you're going for, but I'd change one so it fits with the other.

the arm holes look huge, or the arms are really thin, I can't tell. also,

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I dont like the arms at all they look weird, the colors are nice, but the blue in the face doesnt match.
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her eyes make her look kinda derpy

the shading on the clothes is p. strange, there are a lot of pointy corners too
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What's going on with her left (our right) eye? looks retarded. her arms look WAY slim compared to the size of shirt she has.
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i think some change in clothes colors might help, at first i thought she was trying out for athletics or something instead of running away since shes in all white.
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#10
the shading in the hair could use more contrast, both in shade and hue, considering you shaded her face with blue. you could probably stand to lower the top of her head, too...it looks a bit long and lumpy.
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ackonowledge everything posted so far, will post an update in a few hours when i'm back from work.
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