MAGICAL BOX LAND

[Shawn]

i get that you guys are IDGAF MODS but seriously stop fucking with my topic. :V

[thernz]

The bushes look somewhat stylistically out of place with their one color shading in comparison to the character sprites. The shading on the characters is a bit muddy and cluttered. The shading type on the characters only works well for the slime. With the penguins, the shading throws off the form of the wings, and with the girl, her body is a cylinder. I would evolve into kenneth shawn fejer and simplify or ease up on the character shading because the bush is the best. I still like it 9/10.

[Gors]

i get that you guys are IDGAF MODS but seriously stop fucking with my topic. :V

okay

my bad (i just couldn't resist it heh)

I also suggesting using an even styling to the elements in your mockup. I'm also going to add that the cloud doesn't look like cloud. It should look more... dissolved instead of a white shape.

about the cylinder body, that's because Shawn is using a very limited area, and reproducing the body curves and features is impossible without hurting some of the readability.

I agree with the rest tho

[2+D]

Shawn this is pretty awesome, i love the trees, althoguth the clouds look too plain by just been white, and the character looks nice in my poinion.
Keep it up