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09-08-2010, 11:39 AM
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You look like a dick anyways.
..oh wait, that is a dick!
Didn't see you behind that thing
Well, thank you for your words!
Still a lot to do. I hope that I can finish it in time!
That thing on the pyramid there was meant to be an outstanding stone block, yeah
don't worry, you are not one c:
don't being a dick != using , !'s and :] anyway
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I must be used to girls being the majority on art sites who can get a bit butthurt.
At least i don't mention "uncle alberts" or say "xDD!!! "
@prev: See the difference? The angle is now accurate, with your new horizon. keep it up bro
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hurrrr
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that's quite a bit better good job kori
(09-08-2010, 02:46 PM)cute Wrote:
hurrrr
The diamond is still too rudimentary and the dunes need a little more height. They look Flat.
Other than that, awesome entry !
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i wanted to keep the diamond simple :<
eh, ill give it a shot. also yeah, hills are mainly what im working on now ~*heh*~
but thanks you two (and gors)
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okay so im still gonna try and get things done, but now that school has just started idk how much time i'll have to finish this.
Just saying.
Give me my own member group!
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megazario Wrote:quite amazing good job make up more keep up the good work
plz dont give me a bad point plz for sounding a bit gay here
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take the diamond's outline out, or replace it with a highlight.
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I think, everyone's right about eh diamond. Why's the diamond so important?
Because of the composition. You've got 4 basic elements going on. Think of a ....2x2 grid~
The pyramid in the top left square, desert in the bottom left. On the right, you'll have the diamond, and on the bottom, the biggest of the black monsters.
You have to think: "what catches the eye?" or even "What do people see first?". The diamond? that's one of the 4 things I notice in your composition...
Follow Metaru's tip, that idea seems promising.
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(09-08-2010, 06:47 PM)Rakia Wrote: okay so im still gonna try and get things done, but now that school has just started idk how much time i'll have to finish this.
Just saying.
Finish it man. You can do it.
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I'm actually pretty worried I won't get mine done either, 'cause of school and how slow I'm going and how I keep having to do things over. I hope I can cram as much in Friday night as possible to at least have it presentable
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stop worrying get working
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I'm doin good so far except I got 1 problem.
I'm not too fond of shading rocks.
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