New Pokémon Platform Project [Check Page 4]

[Vipershark]

now that the legs are longer, the arms are once again too short

the hands should be roughly halfway between the waist and knees

[isael-21]

It would be something like this?

Please, don't tell me now the legs are short, well, I hope the legs and the arms are fine now.

SengirDev: Well, thanks but, if I change the head I'll have to change the body and I worked hard to make it, so, I hope you understand, and it doesn't look bad, but I like mine. However, if I have to change Black in-lines then I'll do it, but I want to do it in that head.

Hope you understand

See ya!

[Gors]

yes; now the arms are better. Maybe if you move the hands 2 or 3 pixels up, it'll look better

all you need to do, lineart-wise, is to change the limbs so they don't look like tubes.

[isael-21]

Did it:

3 Pixels up, but don't know what form they have to have, 'cause I want to make him walking after fisnishing the standing.
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[Maneko]

The feet still look too tiny and oval-shaped. Try making them flat on the bottom to make them look as if they were really supporting Ash's weight.

[isael-21]

More Flat... Done:

And I enlarged his personal part cause if I let it short, it will be a bad sprite.

Hope it's fine, and tell me what more, oh and please, don't remember me the Black Out-lines or In-lines, cause that would be the last thing I gotta fix, just that.

I'm ready for the next one xD

[Cobalt Blue]

why dont we just make a new one instead of fixing this.

[isael-21]

whaaa! don't say that please. This is my first sprite and I just wanted to improve it. I just want to make it better, I don't want anything more. Plus, I am not a Pro Spriter, I can't do a simple person. I know this has taken too much time, but I'm not the first and neither the last, right? if this can't go farther, I'll understand.

I just don't want to throw my creation to the trash... but if you insist...

A Custom Sprite is the sprite than you start to do from zero to the end.

If you didn't like the discourse, I'm sorry, but I think I have to fight for what I appreciate.

That's all I can say, I'm not trying to annoy anyone, I'm just saying what I think =)

Thanks for your attention ;D

[DioShiba]

woah holy crap

We understand you want to improve this, but the way it's going now is just looking well, like shit. I can't put it any more simple then then that harsh as it sounds.

Sometimes it's better to restart, if you restart you can easily correct the errors that the original image had, think of it as a massive update rather then something new. and far as I see it this has massive anatomy issues all over far as I can tell, look at a normal human body and compare it to your work if you don't see what I mean.

I mean it's decent for the effort I'll give you that, but if you want to be a good artist you have to take advice, harsh or not. Fighting will get you nowhere far as anything goes. And we don't feel like going through the trouble of that.

[StarSock64]

I restart all the time. I know it sucks, but sometimes you can really improve a lot better by starting over than making little fixes. It's not really just new people who start over either, sometimes it's necessary. This time maybe you'll want to make something smaller, or post an underlying sketch thing first.

It takes perserverence but I mean, you've stuck with it this far. Just try again. You've learned some things already, right? You'll really appreciate learning these basics later on, and you should really try to put it into practice and learn even more.

I believe in yoouu~

[isael-21]

If that's what I have to do, I will not fight, yeah, I want to be a good artist someday, I will restart it, but I won't know how to start it, I was thinking it was going well, but it wasn't, well, all I can say know is...

A Mod or Admin close the Thread please...

I need to work out more on the Techniques of Spriting,

I just want you to tell me one thing, ¿How can I start spriting? I mean, ¿What could I do? ¿With what can I start?

Cause I'm not giving up that easily,

But I talk too much, please close the thread if there's nothing more to say...

Edit: Thanks StarSock64, I gotta work on something more easy, and idk, maybe I could do it better ^^

[Hoeloe]

A Mod or Admin close the Thread please...

Why should they do that?

If you're going to restart the sprite, why can't you just post it in here, then we can give you some more feedback on it, and you can improve it more.

[isael-21]

A Mod or Admin close the Thread please...

Why should they do that?

If you're going to restart the sprite, why can't you just post it in here, then we can give you some more feedback on it, and you can improve it more.

I'm not thinking on doing a sprite now... and I don't want this thread to be here getting older,
I don't know what will I do, so this thread's gonna be inactive, I think.

[Hoeloe]

You'll never improve with that attitude. You got knocked down once, so you've got the choice to forfeit or to pick yourself up and try again. The more you keep picking yourself up, the more you'll be knocked down, but gradually, you'll stay on your feet for longer.

If you quit now, you'll never get anywhere.

Your choice, bro.

[isael-21]

I'm not going anywhere, I'm gonna keep on with this.
You're right, I'm not going anywhere if I quit now,
I'm not gonna give up that easily, I'm going to be a good artist someday xD
Thanks to all of you for your help, if it wasn't for you, I'd be in a bad way
So, I gotta find something to work on, I'll post if I find something.

Thanks again ^^