Kyoko Minazuki Custom Sprite (The hot nurse from Rival Schools)

[TouchDownHero]

I guess it wasn't the best start to my first night as a registered user. T_T

[Frario]

Let's analyse this situation together, TDHero.

What do you think went wrong?
Look at your first post.
Take some time to think it through, and answer me in a civilised way.

[TouchDownHero]

answer me in a civilised way.

Perhaps saying that I was naked wasn't exactly a... civilised...start....

[Frario]

You're obviously heterosexual. Don't forget the majority of the public is heterosexual too. Take that in account.
Such attitude can creep out people or even disgust them.

Now, anything else you observed after analysing?

[Vipershark]

pillowed, banded, and waaaay too many colors

[Cobalt Blue]

it couldn't be any other way. the stupid jokes, memes, arrogant attitude, imaginary world were your stuff is good.

its just UGH.

[DadNier]

only tools say "'tis"

[Cobalt Blue]

i'm giving this thread a few minutes before locking it. its obvious its not going anywhere.

[Vipershark]

maybe

if somebody actually critted the sprites instead of just messing with the OP you wouldn't have to
we're supposed to be nice, right?

this doesn't need to be locked /yet/

[CeeY]

Do you actually want civilized crits for your civilized work?

[triptych]

Do you actually want civilized crits for your civilized work?

Hi stop doing this

If you want to give him crit (which you obviously do), give it to him. Don't act like you're superior to him just because he's the newest "HEY EVERYONE PICK ON ME FOREVER, I MADE A BAD FIRST IMPRESSION" guy.

Grow up and enjoy your latest warn in a small series I like to call "Ceey's honor gets destroyed when I warn him for legitimate reasons apparently".
ps im still giggling at the fact that you claimed a warn from me 'destroys your honor'

[Cobalt Blue]

well, the first thing we could even criticize and give feed back is

anatomy.

its all fucked up in so many levels that i'd strongly suggest that you read this. and actually not because i'm telling you your shit is ugly, but because i'm asuming you're interested in improving your skills and to actually make characters that are appealing to someone else besides your uncle jeff(sic), not to mention characters that actually look and feel human-like.

go easy, start with simple characters, then develop over more advanced poses and so on. this ain't simple or fast, but judging from where you are now, its either stick to your ship and sink miserably or start anew as if nothing happened before.

[Neoriceisgood]

Ignoring the additional info in your intro that should not be relevant and most people should've ignored, here's my C&C:

1. The woman in the catsuit's hips are roughly as wide as her head, now my proportions are roughly as out of whack as they get as I'm a skinny tall dude with an oversized head and I can tell you, even my hips are still wider
than my head; This isn't just playing with anatomy, this is reversing proportions completely.

Stylizing anatomy is all fine and dandy, but when I look at how you handled the catgirl's overal body proportions you just flat out messed up on her waist, there's no way it should or could look the way it does now, and I strongly advice that you try and fix this problem, it's flat out unattractive and makes your characters look like dudes with boobs.

2. On the catgirl again, although you do seem to realise the general size of a human cranium I can't help but wonder why it seems to bulge out at her forehead as well, she'd probably look a lot more elegant without this going on.

Now I'll have to add that I'm extremely interested in what non-fetish art you have, because I honestly can't tell how many of your "mistakes" are based on you just getting off on certain oddities, how many are you sticking true to an awful style and how many are just from incompetence.

Do you have any artwork to show where you were going for say, accurate anatomy or anything else that'd put these figures in perspective?

Thanks in advance, hope my advice helps.

[Lexou Duck]

Also, I'm turning these all into links because they're just



UGH

i think we all agreed that the joke was over a few post ago. ~warned

[Gors]

okay, I'm late here ut I do have my two cents

After reading this whole thread (and that other one in Creativity), I can say that your attitude is kinda 'ugh', considering that you act all high and mighty, uses memes and makes distorted women to please your fetishes.

What I can suggest for now is to leave your fetishes out when making art in general. Art is made for the others to see, and I'm pretty sure no one wants to see your likes in porn, principally if you're posting them in a community like us.

I strongly suggest reading some anatomy tutorials (Metaru's post, for example). Once your distorted visions disappear, then we can talk about pixeling.