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He doesn't have his right eye damaged or covered, it's terrible!
jk. I also like the top one more, but the placing of the mouth feels odd.
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![[Image: 9Pe7T.png]](http://imgur.com/9Pe7T.png)
Unless anyone wants to give up a nugget of advice as to how to improve this; this'll be my final entry.
Specs 'n' Headphones has been revamped! Check it, yo.
![[Image: 10y3mgj.png]](http://i44.tinypic.com/10y3mgj.png)
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His right shoulder (viewer's left) does not look quite right, its giving a bit of lightsource confliction with the rest of the piece.
I've not had any experience shading metal, so I'm not sure what advice I can give to correct that, but it just doesn't look right with this attempt to give his shoulder depth and keep the same lightsource.
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Whoop, corrected.
Edit:
Whoop, nevermind, even better one:
Specs 'n' Headphones has been revamped! Check it, yo.
![[Image: 10y3mgj.png]](http://i44.tinypic.com/10y3mgj.png)
![[Image: groove-1.gif]](http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o156/A1exi_911/groove-1.gif)
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The left part of his chin/cheeks (his right) looks lumpy and awkward
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Can you circle it? I must have been staring at it too long; I don't really see what you mean.
Specs 'n' Headphones has been revamped! Check it, yo.
![[Image: 10y3mgj.png]](http://i44.tinypic.com/10y3mgj.png)
![[Image: groove-1.gif]](http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o156/A1exi_911/groove-1.gif)
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the only thing i'd suggest is that you add a shine or something to his space helmet so it looks like he's actually in the helmet
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I think I'm pretty much done.
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Couldn't really think of any background, so...
But yeah, As I said, I'm probably done now.
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finished.
post something tomguycott!
i don't wanna win by default again (if i win, that is...)
(...i will)