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Wink  10-09-2010, 08:03 PM (This post was last modified: 10-09-2010, 08:05 PM by Silver7890.)
Sorry about my "Dr. Melee Mario" thing, I took what you said and thought about it. Recolors shouldn't be posted on the forums. But, I DO have a submission. As in the title, I have made a Custom PictoChat. No recolors. All custom. I originally made it for my game 'Smash Bros War', but decided to share it with the people of tSR. If you could, can you place this in the Custom/Edited Super Smash Bros. Series under Brawl stages, please? Thank you in advance.

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10-10-2010, 04:00 AM
In Brawl it says on the stage 'Now entering A: Diddy Kong or whatever. Also the imgae box shouldn't actually be on the sheet itself. It should be a seperate image.

Also, you should put your name on it, else people wont be able to credit you. And never use that arrow that points to the image box. It looks ugly. At the very least, use AA on it.
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10-10-2010, 04:17 AM
It's not complete. What about all the drawn contraptions that normally appear on the stage ? They shouldn't be too hard to make.
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10-10-2010, 10:05 AM (This post was last modified: 10-10-2010, 11:15 AM by Silver7890.)
(10-10-2010, 04:17 AM)Lexou Wrote: It's not complete. What about all the drawn contraptions that normally appear on the stage ? They shouldn't be too hard to make.

Actually, Yea, I'll do that. Thanks, I completely forgot that. Thanks, I didn't put the Drawings because I wasn't gonna animate it in mah game, but...yea...thanks, guys. Completely forgot. Also, I'll put the names in for you, Deep.
Ok, I've finished the drawings and crap. Took out the tSR Icon, added the drawings, but wasn't able to add names, because my sister deleted the font. Anywayz, heres the photo.

tSR Icon: [Image: f17317b378b515256d4b68249d155d2f6f5d8ea3.png]

The actual thing:
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[Image: 67bfa504778fededde91aa8616e93cca426ebe7d.png] [Image: 99c55655e15cbd5d5b08b0566d4a4558abe0c430.png] [Image: 226f0ea4b7354bd28270444cb5f220b20bacf92d.png]
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10-10-2010, 11:12 AM
I just realised, the stage background should be bigger, and you forgot to add a couple of drawings (springs, rockets etc.) but this is coming on nicely!
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10-10-2010, 11:17 AM (This post was last modified: 10-10-2010, 12:11 PM by Silver7890.)
(10-10-2010, 11:12 AM)DeepSeaTooth Wrote: I just realised, the stage background should be bigger, and you forgot to add a couple of drawings (springs, rockets etc.) but this is coming on nicely!

Thanks, I'm working as hard as possible. I forgot the Rocket, 'cuz im playing on the Pictochat stage in Brawl now, and haven't seen rockets, so thanks for remindin' meh!
Ok, I'm positive I got EVERY drawing from SSBB.

tSR Icon:
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Actual Image (Really Big):
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10-10-2010, 04:54 PM
too much blank space and the drawings are TOO unpolished.
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10-10-2010, 05:41 PM
(10-10-2010, 04:54 PM)Gors٫ Gors Wrote: too much blank space and the drawings are TOO unpolished.

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10-11-2010, 01:49 AM
You do realise that a lot of the on screen drawings have more than one sprite (eg, the spring moves down the rockets explode etc). The dog and house are in the wrong colour. The stage is too big now. One of the spikes has been randomly coloured in. Draw a square around the island with the flag on it. Any annotations I would personally put on the outside.

This is just a checklist of things I think need brushing up.
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