Cyber's Stuff topic - Stuff

[Cshad]

I'm going to remake the boogie man pa, seeing as convincing myself that I couldn't shade something that big, didn't really help me make any progress in it.



Im going to remake the boogie PA scene thing as soon as I do another one of these.

C+C so far? Im going to add the other hand holding a gun soon.

[Cshad]

Should I continue one or two?

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

The pose is near-impossible to do. You try twisting your body so that your right arm is covering your left buttock.
It's uncomfortable.

[Cshad]

It looks like that because Im having a few depth issues on the piece. Like with the legs, and apparently the shorts. Any suggestions on how to fix it :X? Or should I just change the pose completely?

EDIT:


Should I do something similar to the third ones leg position? I think its more readable now.

Its really rough, I can see a few flaws with it, but something similiar to that?

[Stirred Drei Ling]

Move the entire right arm more to the right. That will solve the issues with the position.

[CeeY]

It's getting much better, however the dithering on the shirt gave it that "fabric" look.

[Cshad]

@Drei: Ill try it in the next update
@CY: Ill try the dithering again



Now for a small pallete swap, should I use the original, or one of the new ones?

[CeeY]

I think the original looks better, because that pale red matches better with a pale grey.

[Cshad]

The one outside the box clear up all of the problems?

[Stirred Drei Ling]

Great job Cyber. Other than the lower arm has a bump on it and it looks odd how the belt is completely straight, I see no problems. For the belt I say tilt it up slightly.

[Cshad]

Starting something new because I got bored~



WIP harvest man, eye, cloud, face, whistle, thing.

Any C+C so far? WIP

[Cshad]

Update.
Which one?

[Previous]

The last one.

It looks to me like the longer right leg (viewer's right) isn't attached to the body properly. Too far at the back or something like that, I'm not sure.

[Cshad]

Ill fix the leg in my next update.
I decided on the last one as well.
Thank you



Update

[Cshad]

I think Im done?