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[LaDestitute]

Sorta got me thinking, lol.

[Baegal]

Sorry for the /very/ long delay ;A;

[Vipershark]

me irl

[Baegal]

My apologies, I haven't been able to find time to work on these :[

[Lexou Duck]

I don't get it... ;A;

[Kitsu]

I cried...

[Chutzpar]

I hope you're not actually anti-meds or I'm going to have to derail and get very very angry. :v

I think you need to study expressions more. The way you draw faces doesn't really say anything about the character's emotions. I mean, this most recent one is probably the best example, what does the "" face actually say about his emotion, especially baring in mind you haven't given him any eyebrows? Answer: very little. Is he focussing on something now? Is he just being thoughtful? Take the words out of the speech bubbles - is it still obvious how he's feeling without their help?

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

where did the wall go?

[Baegal]

I hope you're not actually anti-meds or I'm going to have to derail and get very very angry. :v

I think you need to study expressions more. The way you draw faces doesn't really say anything about the character's emotions. I mean, this most recent one is probably the best example, what does the "" face actually say about his emotion, especially baring in mind you haven't given him any eyebrows? Answer: very little. Is he focussing on something now? Is he just being thoughtful? Take the words out of the speech bubbles - is it still obvious how he's feeling without their help?

hmm, you make a good point. I never really thought about it too much, I'll try to keep that in mind from now on (fyi I have nothing against medications. all of these comics are just random thoughts that i put down on paper. none of it is meant to offend anyone or anything).

@murder: which wall are you talking about?

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

oh those are clouds, my bad

[Baegal]

IT'S BACK!!
Summer vacation has begun, so now I have much more free time to work on these, so expect more soon (but don't depend on it~)!
I have four more drawn, but they need to be colored, so here's 3 more for now, because of the long hiatus.

[Baegal]

Kind of a lame one, but it had to be done

[Lord Melchior]

not sure why but the last one made me laugh really hard xd

good job on these comics, they're hilarious. Will be looking forward to more of these

[Baegal]

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[Chutzpar]

I think you need to plan your speech bubbles more. Some of them look a bit cramped.

Firstly you should probably do rough thumbnails of your page layout (if you aren't already) accounting for your speech bubbles in your layout (otherwise you might find you've drawn art you're really attached to, but can't fit the speech bubble in anywhere)
when you come to draw your comic, you might find it helpful if you write the text in first and then draw the speech bubble around it. That way you won't have to squish up your writing to fit it all in.