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It sounds a little sloppy, like the drums and the guitar weren't meant to go together.
If that's what you're going for, then awesome Tyvon.
If not? Make it work more.
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how do you mean?
do you mean like how the guitar is really off from the drums in the beginning? that was just me playing badly lol
i'm gonna re-record the guitar and bass when i write the rest of the song so it'll flow well instead of sounding jumpy and terrible like my previous songs
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It has potential. ...Can I hear a puppy getting beat in the background?
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07-31-2008, 11:12 AM
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Awesome, this is very good far as the preveiw went. *Sits waiting for full version*
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Feels a little bit like a midi file, but the idea is there.
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08-05-2008, 08:41 AM
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haven't listened yet
e: now have, could do with quieter, and different drums, so pplz wouldn't get bored.
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IMO, the guitar sounds were great, the drums seemed waay too pwerful, I think some rhythym guitar would've added some nice effect, and I think you need a bigger bass noise.
Nice though!
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All I'll say is that the guitar and drums don't add up. The pace sounds so different, and the guitar sounds like an entirely different element instead of a proper work-together with the drums. The idea IS there, but I might recommend you to try to make your guitar more refined and classy and go for a more stylish, yet positively sensible mix. On the good side, the melody itself is catchy to that point.
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the guitar sounds shitty from a recording problem, where i recorded it too quietly and digitally increased the sound, which added a lot of feedback.
although i agree with you about the guitar sounding out of place. i've been fuckin around with it a lot lately and i think i've come up with something good, but i'll leave it up to you guys to decide when i actually have it at a "showable" point[:
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