Psychebound concept art ~ MS Paint extravaganza

[PrettyNier]

http://infinite-xesos.deviantart.com/#/d3bqpl7

concept art for a game that i'm working on with dr.slouch, drawn with MS paint. comments and critique would be pretty nice, either in-thread or on the dA link.

C+C~

[Gors]

colors are nice and all but what the hell is going on with the boy

he looks off-balance, his anatomy looks weird and his head looks a lot rougher than the rest of the piece

[Helmo]

I like the monster

[PrettyNier]

colors are nice and all but what the hell is going on with the boy

he looks off-balance, his anatomy looks weird and his head looks a lot rougher than the rest of the piece

he kind of is off-balance, partially because i goofed. the issue is exacerbated because of his weird bunched up over-sized sweater.

the hair is rough because i sped through it, used a smaller square brush and my mouse isn't the best.

I might see about trying to fix it soon

[Desert Cat]

It's a little splotchy for my taste, but you have great color choice.

[stache]

The top left part of his left arm seems to have a chunk missing.... Or it just becomes extremely skinny there.

[rmiller3one]

i like the afro-ish hair. the elbow on the left arm looks a bit off though.