Lil Ghostie

[KoopaEater]

My first custom sprites! Please critque!



Look at them close before you get critquing.

[TomGuycott]

The colors make it BARELY readable, and for something that small there's almost no point shading it the way you did. Make it bigger or make a bigger contrast between the outline and the rest.

[Gors]

also I suggest making only ONE topic for you instead of making several little ones.

[KoopaEater]

I am somewhat happy with this one.

Somewhat.

[Gors]

instead of making several small stuff, I also suggest making a mediun-big thing and improve it before moving to something else.

[Cobalt Blue]

and stop saving as a jpeg

[KoopaEater]

It's not a jpeg...?

[Iceman404]

Durr, it is Jpeg...? Try doing something interesting for once. All of these are just random sprites out of nowhere with no inspiration, it seems like your just spriting to show us and not improve (A tiny blob with red eyes?). Stick with one sprite for more than a few hours and build upon it.

[Proton]

Durr, it is Jpeg...?

I've visited this topic 3 times since around 3pm, and I still haven't seen .jpg.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Durr, it is Jpeg...?

I've visited this topic 3 times since around 3pm, and I still haven't seen .jpg.

should've gone to specsavers


if you open it up in paint and use the bucket, you'll soon notice that there are jpg artefacts. that being said one can usually notice without doing so.



the volume on the desk is poorly conveyed because of the way it's shaded. my suggestion is you get rid of the darkest shade of grey.

[Cobalt Blue]

Durr, it is Jpeg...?

I've visited this topic 3 times since around 3pm, and I still haven't seen .jpg.

its ok, most people can't see the diference until they zoom in.

others can just develop a pixel sense after working on this for so long