Posts: 3,787
Threads: 75
Joined: May 2008
You know, about the arms. The should stick out to it's front and at the ends the should be cloth hanging down, kinda. By what I mean... it should go straight forward and at some point it should suddenly go straight downward.
Also, the left (its left) Arm looks weird.
Posts: 1,410
Threads: 16
Joined: May 2008
08-11-2008, 05:54 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-11-2008, 05:54 AM by Rakia.)
Fix up some parts of the outline, it looks sketchy.
Also the colours need to be duller.
But it's a good start.
Give me my own member group!
--
megazario Wrote:quite amazing good job make up more keep up the good work
plz dont give me a bad point plz for sounding a bit gay here
Posts: 1,580
Threads: 19
Joined: May 2008
08-11-2008, 06:28 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-11-2008, 06:28 PM by CeeY.)
(08-11-2008, 05:54 AM)Rakia Wrote: Fix up some parts of the outline, it looks sketchy.
Also the colours need to be duller.
But it's a good start.
Ok, I left out the back spikes or whatever they are out, because it was making the sprite look bad, so judge without the spikes, And I fixed a lot,
Posts: 1,039
Threads: 5
Joined: May 2008
08-11-2008, 06:38 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-11-2008, 06:39 PM by Miles07.)
Ehh... I liked it better with the spikes, 'cuz now it looks like a baby Yoshi ghost...
Posts: 444
Threads: 24
Joined: May 2008
Haha, that's really awesome. It might look flatter if you got rid of the highlights on the nose, but idk , looks really nice either way. :>
Posts: 1,580
Threads: 19
Joined: May 2008
(08-11-2008, 06:38 PM)Miles07 Wrote: Ehh... I liked it better with the spikes, 'cuz now it looks like a baby Yoshi ghost...
LOL, I will put them back on but I just wanted to judge without for a change.
And thanks everybody + X Gamer 66 =D