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#1
08-13-2008, 12:34 PM
The Legend Of Luigi, my comic series, I wasn't sure I should post but here It is, also, don't expect any fancy effects, but If you know a program which can give me some, PM me, thnx, Anyway,

Comic #1 The Legend Begins
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#2
08-13-2008, 04:28 PM
Colored Textboxes, broken forth wall, self-insert, and that poor attempt at humor in the first two panels failed. You've got AA going against the black background, the character is a poor attempt at editing, and your title panel is very close to illegible. Also, mixing sprite styles is bad.


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#3
08-13-2008, 04:58 PM
Zee, you can lock, or close, or something to this thread, I'm gonna quit my comic series...
So you can close the thread.
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#4
08-13-2008, 05:10 PM
Shortest.
Comic career.
Ever.
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megazario Wrote:quite amazing good job make up more keep up the good work
plz dont give me a bad point plz for sounding a bit gay here
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#5
08-13-2008, 05:39 PM
(08-13-2008, 05:10 PM)Rakia Wrote: Shortest.
Comic career.
Ever.

I was gonna continue but I decided that what I had so far for the story was pretty bad, so I quit Rolleyes
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#6
08-13-2008, 08:07 PM
Wow quitting... that gets you far.
You know you could always try again? Take into account what others have said and improve your work.
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#7
08-13-2008, 08:28 PM
I like the who cares about that bit, but I would rather have it cut into a story instead of you.
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#8
08-14-2008, 03:37 AM
you know, it really isn't that bad. it's just a damn intro comic. it's not super sloppy or anything like the rest of the shit thrown this way.

i'd say go for another issue and then get crits on that.
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#9
08-14-2008, 11:26 AM
(08-13-2008, 05:10 PM)Rakia Wrote: Shortest.
Comic career.
Ever.

You've never seen any of the comic on Sprites Inc, have you?
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#10
08-14-2008, 01:00 PM
You should continue, quitting gets you no where. Surprise
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#11
08-14-2008, 01:26 PM
(08-14-2008, 01:00 PM)Manaphy94 Wrote: You should continue, quitting gets you no where. Surprise

Because All of you are comenting on this, then I'll continue, and I had done part 2 already so here it is, CC please and enjoy till part 3 (Part 2 doesn't have anything THAT important...)

Comic #2 LaLoser
   

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#12
08-16-2008, 01:43 AM
went downhill
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#13
08-17-2008, 10:19 PM
Someone is now going to be helping me with my comics his name is J-bit, so yeah, he'll be helping me now Big Grin
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#14
08-18-2008, 12:37 PM
Hi everyone! So I'm gonna help Perigi with this comic. I'll try to get you guys to like the comic with comedy and epic story lines. Enjoy!
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Check out my comic Boo.
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Here's a link to Boo.
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