10-04-2012, 03:04 PM
Better?
Nick's Pixels'n'stuff
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10-04-2012, 03:56 PM
the spikes look like they are growing instead of bouncing. his nose also looks a tad too big. other than that, its great!!
10-04-2012, 04:07 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-04-2012, 04:09 PM by NICKtendo DS.)
(10-04-2012, 03:56 PM)recolorme Wrote: the spikes look like they are growing instead of bouncing. Well, I was going for growing rather than bouncing, so yeah. Every quill on his back is raring to stab something. Oh, and the nose is a style choice. I have another enemy (not posted here) called Cerber, who has a similar big nose. Not as big, but proportionally. Thanked by: recme
10-04-2012, 04:52 PM
10-08-2012, 02:24 PM
the top part of 'PRINCESS' is hard to read because it's almost the same color as the BG. Catventure could do with a thicker line and AA to help smoothen it. I suggest outlining the PRINCESS FANTASY text with a lighter outline so it sticks out from the BG more.
also make the crown rest on the E correctly, or put it on top of the S.
10-08-2012, 05:44 PM
Should have waited for the feedback, but I couldn't
The game has been finalized, so it's set in stone pretty much. Still appreciate the feedback, though. I have a PFC topic in the Game Dev forum in case you haven't seen it.
10-24-2012, 06:55 AM
Created a tFR arena based on Princess Fantasy Catventure to pass the time.
The most prominent feature is Castle, the boss of Babylon Kingdom in PFC, but it also includes Princess sitting on top of his shoulder, the four basic fruit and, though it is hard to recognize because in the original game it looks like a simple mountain, Dragon's Keep in the background. Thanked by: Phaze, HandToeKnee, Zadaben, Shade
10-24-2012, 07:10 AM
desaturate some of the elements, mainly the big robot and pillars, as they're drawing more attention than the actual fighters. Remember, a background shall never be in the way of the characters.
Otherwise that's great. Thanked by: Phaze, NICKtendo DS, Gaia
10-24-2012, 07:21 AM
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Thanked by: Garamonde, Phaze, Mag, redblueyellow, HandToeKnee, Zadaben, Chaoxys, Gwen, Shade
12-22-2012, 03:19 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-22-2012, 08:04 PM by NICKtendo DS.)
I've been working on and off on this. I barely had any time to do anything digital, because my brother keeps dominating the good computer (the one with mah tools). Since he's away for the day, I've been catching up with various things. I have finished a logo (Radish) in Illustrator, colored 2 comic pages and continued this. I'm not sure whether I'll be able to finish this today; I'm pretty worked after the comic pages and logo. It might be delayed again for X days, so I thought I'd share some progress while I have the chance. EDIT: Crabmeat. Could be a weapon, could be an obstacle, could be a spectator even. EDIT 2: Heh. looks like I finished it after all. I have it queued for submission.
12-23-2012, 04:22 PM
Blaze the Cat (WIP)
Concept art: http://cybermaroon.deviantart.com/#/d5ozmx3 I got some additional PC time, so I managed to finish another page of the Bouncy Cat comic and started this.
12-24-2012, 06:16 AM
That's a really huge hand...
12-24-2012, 08:35 AM
12-25-2012, 03:14 PM
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