The Smash Bros. Project 4.5

[tsr moderation staff]

You need to start sheeting man, you just keep revamping.

[Kirbyfan]

You need to start sheeting man, you just keep revamping.

Me or piks?

[tsr moderation staff]

Pik, you just started.

[Kirbyfan]

Pik, you just started.

oh good. For a second there, I was worried.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Could I try doing Falco? It's still open, isn't it?

[Kirbyfan]

I pretty sure you can, nobody seems to be working on him.


Made hammers brighter. I believe that there's faces should take up more space, and the hood less, so I'm gonna work doing that later.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I didn't trace him.
I'll start shading now, I'm pretty happy with the outline
There's the shading:

Should I up the contrast?

[Wes]

That falco is about 5 or 6 pixels too tall.



the lower red line is how tall he should be, while the top line is how tall you made him. The shading is wrong for the style, and he looks like hes leaning back a lot. Maybe move his head forward a bit.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPu0Ee7nNGg

These are my refs, and I'm pretty sure Falco's back's like that (yes, I'm a pain, saying I'm right etc. ) but I'll move his arm and head.
Damn, I was pushing my luck for size xc
Thanks anyway

[Kirbyfan]

His legs are 1 or 2 pixels too tall, but other than that, very good!


I changed the faces size and hood size. I made the hood a bit too thin in the top-left area though. I'll fix that right now.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I suggest you give them a blush (you know, they've got rosy cheeks). I think (I'll need to check) that their feet and hands are bigger. Could you show me your ref please? <:/
There, fixed mine:

[Kirbyfan]

The blush I'm still working on, but it is there, just not very noticeable.

I changed the thinness problems.
Here's my references:
http://www.smashbros.com/en_us/character...mbers.html
The hands are fine, I believe, but the feet do need to be bigger. Thanks for pointing that out.

Your Falco is a bit short now, only a few pixels. I like your first one better, just change his legs and then make it match, and you'll be pretty much ready.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I beg your pardon then ^^
I suggest you make their smile curl up with AA, and not with a dark pixel. I think the eyes should be bit bigger. Maybe add some orange to the hammer. I would make the fluff stuff a bit thicker everywhere and add a bit more white.
You're doing great!

As for me, I've tried just shortening the legs on the big one (far right):

[Kirbyfan]

That's exactly what I wanted you to do, and from the looks of it, it's great.


I added bigger shoes and those socks that I never noticed. I tried to added orange to hammer before, and it didn't turn out well, but I'll try again. And also, what's AA?
Next one will have:
-Thicker and Brighter Fluff
-Bigger Eyes (I planned to do this anyways)
-Color-correct hammer
-Noticeable Blush

I'll do that AA thingy with the smile after I learn what it is.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Ah, sorry: AA->Anti-Aliasing.
Well, I would've been happy keeping it as you liked it, it's just that it's going over the pink line, which is the maximum height allowed