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Constructive criticism for SSBS's Sonic:
-Run animation doesn't look like it would animate very well. Same applies to most of the animations.
-The Quills on the falling animation look weird. Specifically, the lineart and the shading.
-Spinballs should be rounder and shaded more like Sonic.
-The shields look fine for placeholders, but otherwise they look horribly resized.
-In most of the animations, it looks like you just copied the head from the base sprite and edited it, which, didn't seem to always come out right.
Tip: Try animating some of these so that we can see better what they look like. Also, don't take anything I said rudely.
@Spoder, yeah, I think you should make him lean forward more. Looking good, though!
And I like Ton's idea for a subforum.
Lean forward more and move his arms.
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->Sploder:
Mmmh, that animation will come in handy for Falco
Kidding, I'll loosely inspire myself off that and my video ref.
I think it's a little fast, and as stated before, you should put the head further forward and animate the arms slightly.
YOU HAVE TO FEEL WHAT YOU DRAW, FEEL
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Don´t make a new Snake . The old one was almost finished .
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02-22-2009, 02:13 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-22-2009, 02:13 PM by Kairos.)
The old one also was in slightly less quality and not really in style.
C2B- Please don't give the sprite ridiculously small heads kthnx.
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(02-22-2009, 02:13 PM)Rags Wrote: The old one also was in considerably less quality and not really in style.
fixed
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(02-21-2009, 05:25 PM)GadgetTR Wrote: Constructive criticism for SSBS's Sonic:
-Run animation doesn't look like it would animate very well. Same applies to most of the animations.
-The Quills on the falling animation look weird. Specifically, the lineart and the shading.
-Spinballs should be rounder and shaded more like Sonic.
-The shields look fine for placeholders, but otherwise they look horribly resized.
-In most of the animations, it looks like you just copied the head from the base sprite and edited it, which, didn't seem to always come out right.
Tip: Try animating some of these so that we can see better what they look like. Also, don't take anything I said rudely.
@Spoder, yeah, I think you should make him lean forward more. Looking good, though!
And I like Ton's idea for a subforum.
alright i appreciate it btw my computer rebooted and i need to find a goof gif can someone tell me where
02-22-2009, 03:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-22-2009, 05:48 PM by Kitsu.)
A goof gif?
Or do you mean good?
Are you looking for an animator?
If it's any help, I use a combination of Game Maker and Microsoft GIF Animator.
Anyways, how's this look:
EDIT: AGH! Slow anim...
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finish the old one , if you won´t have enough time forthe new one
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We don't have a deadline for anything. And the new one is much better for this project.
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(02-22-2009, 07:13 PM)spriteanimator Wrote: If you think so. More people think so, and besides, this project is running for a few years now.
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(02-22-2009, 06:01 PM)spriteanimator Wrote: finish the old one , if you won´t have enough time forthe new one
I know I'm one of the people who helped remake snake, I think the reason we aren't getting done is we redo too much.
By the way, when's the new forum coming up?
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