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The Smash Bros. Project 4.5
Constructive criticism for SSBS's Sonic:

-Run animation doesn't look like it would animate very well. Same applies to most of the animations.
-The Quills on the falling animation look weird. Specifically, the lineart and the shading.
-Spinballs should be rounder and shaded more like Sonic.
-The shields look fine for placeholders, but otherwise they look horribly resized.
-In most of the animations, it looks like you just copied the head from the base sprite and edited it, which, didn't seem to always come out right.

Tip: Try animating some of these so that we can see better what they look like. Also, don't take anything I said rudely.

@Spoder, yeah, I think you should make him lean forward more. Looking good, though!

And I like Ton's idea for a subforum.
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Lean forward more and move his arms.
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->Sploder:
Mmmh, that animation will come in handy for Falco Wink
Kidding, I'll loosely inspire myself off that and my video ref.
I think it's a little fast, and as stated before, you should put the head further forward and animate the arms slightly.
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Don´t make a new Snake . The old one was almost finished .
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The old one also was in slightly less quality and not really in style.

C2B- Please don't give the sprite ridiculously small heads kthnx.
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(02-22-2009, 02:13 PM)Rags Wrote: The old one also was in considerably less quality and not really in style.

fixed
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(02-21-2009, 05:25 PM)GadgetTR Wrote: Constructive criticism for SSBS's Sonic:

-Run animation doesn't look like it would animate very well. Same applies to most of the animations.
-The Quills on the falling animation look weird. Specifically, the lineart and the shading.
-Spinballs should be rounder and shaded more like Sonic.
-The shields look fine for placeholders, but otherwise they look horribly resized.
-In most of the animations, it looks like you just copied the head from the base sprite and edited it, which, didn't seem to always come out right.

Tip: Try animating some of these so that we can see better what they look like. Also, don't take anything I said rudely.

@Spoder, yeah, I think you should make him lean forward more. Looking good, though!

And I like Ton's idea for a subforum.

alright i appreciate it btw my computer rebooted and i need to find a goof gif can someone tell me where
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A goof gif?

Or do you mean good?

Are you looking for an animator?
If it's any help, I use a combination of Game Maker and Microsoft GIF Animator.

Anyways, how's this look:
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EDIT: AGH! Slow anim...
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finish the old one , if you won´t have enough time forthe new one
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We don't have a deadline for anything. And the new one is much better for this project.
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If you think so.
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(02-22-2009, 02:13 PM)Rags Wrote: The old one also was in slightly less quality and not really in style.

C2B- Please don't give the sprite ridiculously small heads kthnx.
Nah, I got the message from everybody Wink
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A comparison. I really hate the bigger head, I'm working on an in-between head.
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(02-22-2009, 07:13 PM)spriteanimator Wrote: If you think so.
More people think so, and besides, this project is running for a few years now.
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Middle one's new. Is it better?
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(02-22-2009, 06:01 PM)spriteanimator Wrote: finish the old one , if you won´t have enough time forthe new one

I know I'm one of the people who helped remake snake, I think the reason we aren't getting done is we redo too much.

By the way, when's the new forum coming up?

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