[Sprite Comic] Pokemon: The Commercial

[justover6]

Pokemon: The Commercial [Updated: Monday, Wednesday, Friday]
Follow the journey of the Thief and the Girl with more fluids than she can handle as they travel to steal a mysterious package and a mother's last memento to her daughter. However these objects are being transported by a group of Knights and maybe the legend himself; The God of Death.

I mainly posted this here because Dazz and redblueyellow ripped most of the sprites so kudos to you.

Issue 1
Issue 2
Issue 2 [Large]

OK people let's leave this thread argument free. This is just for posting the comic. I will no longer discuss anything from the previous threads. It's Dead.

[Phantom Killah]

Well, it certainly is a comic. I've seen several comics before, and this is one of them.

[justover6]

Issue 2 has been uploaded, I enlarged the picture for issue 2. It looked better on my computer, worst after upload. Should I continue enlarging issues or leave it in it's original format?

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

You haven't even considered anything anyone has told you. Why did you think I asked so many questions in my critique? To make you think why you made such lazy, inconsiderate and incompetent choices for your comic, so that you could find a way of improving. That obviously flew sky high over your head like the Concorde.

[[robo9]]

"Where!!!" is a question, it should at least contain a question mark

The, not "thee"

Capitalize the "it's" in panel 6

See's is possessive. See, sees, saw, and seen are verbs.

[Gors]

why are you even wasting time giving c+c to someone who is incompetent not to apply them


leave this thread alone, don't make more posts

[Lexou Duck]

Dude, can you just do one thing ?

Find someone at home, like your brother, or roommate or whatever, and ask him to read the first issue of your comic.
Then, ask him to resume the page.
Did he understand the story like you wanted it ?

[DioShiba]

I knew this thread was going to keep on going around in circles.

He's not going to learn his lesson anytime soon. Just lock this topic, and if justover6 makes another one you can ban him since he shouldn't even be remaking topics that have been locked anyways. I'm surprised you guys didn't do it the second time around.

[Gors]

I still don't get why do you guys still give c+c, this is supposed to rot without new comments



oh well

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asdfa he reported me, shit just got real