Barbariccia

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After a little break, some pose tweaking! It looks more dynamic now

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Her hips seem to be placed quite high, which gives the impression she has a pretty short torso. This impression is accentuated by the relative straightness of her right side and the distance between her navel and her underwear. I don't know if you were aiming for a pose in which she leans forward (consequently "squashing" form), but if it's the case, my edit on the bottom right (previous page) could help you.

[Gors]

the best would to make the navel not a 'dot', but a 'line' like chris' edit. When we bend up, the skin makes indents, so if you want her to lean, you might want to check that.

I am not exactly the best at criticising realistic anatomy as chris' but these are my two cents c: