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M&L Bristle
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#1
08-29-2008, 06:11 AM
Yesterday, I was bored so I tried M&L style again. I really like how this sprite turned out.


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08-29-2008, 09:59 AM
Too dark.
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#3
08-29-2008, 10:12 AM
Too small.
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#4
08-30-2008, 01:09 AM
Too oriented to the screen. Not facing the bros.
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08-30-2008, 06:41 AM (This post was last modified: 08-30-2008, 07:54 AM by Green Fire Kirby.)
(08-29-2008, 09:59 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote: Too dark.

http://www.mariowiki.com/Bristle/ This enemy is dark in PM:TTYD and the rest is pretty light. I tried it lighter and it looks weird.

(08-29-2008, 10:12 AM)Skidd Wrote: Too small.

[Image: Bristle.png]It's pretty much correct, and it can't go any bigger or smaller than it is or it will look weird.

(08-30-2008, 01:09 AM)Smash Wrote: Too oriented to the screen. Not facing the bros.

This is OW not Battle, or else people would walk like they do in Final Fantasy: Tactics Advance.

If no one has anything else to say on how to fix it up, I'm going to continue.
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08-30-2008, 10:37 AM
(08-30-2008, 06:41 AM)Green Fire Kirby Wrote:
(08-29-2008, 09:59 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote: Too dark.

http://www.mariowiki.com/Bristle/ This enemy is dark in PM:TTYD and the rest is pretty light. I tried it lighter and it looks weird.

(08-29-2008, 10:12 AM)Skidd Wrote: Too small.

[Image: Bristle.png]It's pretty much correct, and it can't go any bigger or smaller than it is or it will look weird.

(08-30-2008, 01:09 AM)Smash Wrote: Too oriented to the screen. Not facing the bros.

This is OW not Battle, or else people would walk like they do in Final Fantasy: Tactics Advance.

If no one has anything else to say on how to fix it up, I'm going to continue.
It is too small, also look at Ballad's, it should look like his http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintend...ristol.png
And your colors are too dark.
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#7
08-30-2008, 12:10 PM
Ballads are in battle sprites, not overworld.
And Im pretty sure bristle isnt blue, he just needs brighter colors of his current version.
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08-30-2008, 04:07 PM
Also, no black outlines "inside" the sprite. Use dark gray, please?

And this doesn't have the same palette as a normal Bristle. More like a Dark Bristle.
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09-16-2008, 06:02 AM
Sorry I haven't updated in a long time. I've been busy. I tried some different palettes. Tell me which ones the best. [Image: Bristle-1.png]
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09-16-2008, 10:58 AM
#6 looks like a Dark Bristle, so that's good, but I can't quite pick out a normal Bristle palette. Maybe #1?
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09-16-2008, 02:23 PM (This post was last modified: 09-16-2008, 02:27 PM by EdpR.)
(09-16-2008, 06:02 AM)Green Fire Kirby Wrote: Sorry I haven't updated in a long time. I've been busy. I tried some different palettes. Tell me which ones the best. [Image: Bristle-1.png]

i would make love to #4
edit: needs more hue shift and contrast though
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10-11-2008, 06:03 AM (This post was last modified: 10-11-2008, 06:05 AM by Green Fire Kirby.)
I'm back. I was waiting to get more color suggestions, and I forgot about Bristle. Anyways I'm going with 1 because it was the only one a liked that got a vote.

[Image: Bristle-2.png]

Also, I was going through some of my older work, and found a half completed M&l King Sammer sheet. I fixed it up and added color, but I'm probably not going to continue it.

[Image: KingSammerandSammerGuys.png]

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